I was not looking least twas not my intent... for my heart I had put to sleep Safe from all despair. I had built a fortress, Inpenetrable around my heart I was infallible or so I thought.. until one day out of the blue, you appeared and something in the way you spoke a vulnerability I sensed in you, an urgency that awakened in me feelings long cast asunder, hidden away to hibernate for evermore.. And yet you were able to break through and return to me something of great value that had been missing for so long.. My heart.
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
Dedicated to someone who has helped me through a rough past couple of months.. more than he will ever know.
poetengineerriyadh, Ar Riyad Saudi ArabiaAug 23, 2009
beautiful expressing for feelings in ur heart , i read it and i feel it true cos it coming from kind gloden heart as u have , thanks for all ur sweet shares here ,which really make this site rich with ur beautiful thoughts ,i become wait to read ur new poems as the farmers wait the harvest time impatience , thanks for u
I wonder if this man knows who he is that you write about, if he knows it's about him i'm sure he found out something he really did't know before:) Ty Q S beautiful expression of you!
Comments (67)
welldone
i like the way you used to dedicate this poem to thank to a stranger or is he a friend of you ?
its nice....
sabeel.
this is very very lovely
gets. One to be published.
quietstorm
thank you
very beautiful thankyou!
blessings
i enjoyed your poem, very warm, sincere, and refreshing, as a clear stream- Love.
Thanks ...
xx
tc
gerry