This One's For You...

I was not looking
least twas not my intent...
for my heart I had put to sleep
Safe from all despair.
I had built a fortress,
Inpenetrable around my heart
I was infallible or so I thought..
until one day out of the blue, you appeared
and something in the way you spoke
a vulnerability I sensed in you,
an urgency that awakened in me
feelings long cast asunder,
hidden away to hibernate for evermore..
And yet you were able to break through
and return to me something of great value
that had been missing for so long..
My heart.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
Dedicated to someone who has helped me through a rough past couple of months.. more than he will ever know.

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handsonesam
what a lovely and full of life poem
welldonebouquet thumbs up
sabeel
dear poet..applause
i like the way you used to dedicate this poem to thank to a stranger or is he a friend of you ?
its nice....
sabeel.teddybear
QuietStormF
handsonesam Thanks for your comments, Much appreciated.. teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you Sabeel.. yes a very good friend who saw me through some very dark days, following my recent loss.. teddybear
Grá__
I love this one, I really do :)
QuietStormF
Thanks so much for saying..teddybear
HotrodLarrys
Great Work, has meaning and strength, and Your thoughts spoke for you, I Like It! Hotrodcool heart wings
shhores
quietstorm
this is very very lovelyteddybear
PassionatePoetonline today!
A wonderful way to express the words from your heart and soul that help put a smile on the face of others and to one maybe in his heart. wine bouquet
andrew149
very beautifully put, thankyou QSF.....xxx
QuietStormF
Thank-you shhores.. teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you Passionate Poet.. teddybear
QuietStormF
Thankyou Andrew teddybear
poetengineer
beautiful expressing for feelings in ur heart , i read it and i feel it true cos it coming from kind gloden heart as u have , thanks for all ur sweet shares here ,which really make this site rich with ur beautiful thoughts ,i become wait to read ur new poems as the farmers wait the harvest time impatience , thanks for u
QuietStormF
Oh Poetenginer..You always say the nicest things....I am glad you enjoy reading my poetry as I do yours...hug
Bentlee
I wonder if this man knows who he is that you write about, if he knows it's about him i'm sure he found out something he really did't know before:) Ty Q S beautiful expression of you!
QuietStormF
I think he does now... hug
Bentlee
I believe he does:)
gypsyheart
What a beautiful and well written poem from the heart QuietStormhug teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you Gypsyheart for your nice comments..teddybear
boyshchrm6
That is as touching and well written and constructed as poetry
gets.thumbs up One to be published.sad flower
southmiami
Lovely every step to the end !
QuietStormF
Thank-you boyshchrm6 I couldn't ask for a more positive response than that! teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you for your nice comments southmiami..teddybear
Bentlee
Thank you Q S :)
shhores
reading it again its even more poignant
quietstorm
thank youteddybear
QuietStormF
No.. Thank-YOU... Bentlee.. hug
QuietStormF
Thank-you shhores, I'm glad you enjoy it.. This one is special to me... teddybear
fareaway
quiet stormF
very beautiful thankyou!
blessings
teddybear
QuietStormF
Yhank-you faraway.. one of my favorites I have written..hug
Sunnn
"hidden away to hibernate for evermore"

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HotrodLarrys
Hi There QS, Thats all i need to sayhug bouquet
QuietStormF
Thank-you sunn........ somwtimes it seems that way.hug
QuietStormF
Thanks Larry and sometimes few words are all that is needed... hug
boyshchrm6
Wonderful poem with current meaning.
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GiGi55
hi,
i enjoyed your poem, very warm, sincere, and refreshing, as a clear stream- Love.
Thanks ...
xx
tc
gerrybouquet handshake applause
jazzy75
QuietStorm - beautifully expressed. teddybear
QuietStormF
Thank-you Larry for your comments.. hug teddybear
QuietStormF
Hi and thank-you so much for your comments.. and so glad you enjoyed.. teddybear bouquet
QuietStormF
Thank-you Jazzy.. for your postive comments.. hug teddybear
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