Closed Door

Prickly skin warning of things unseen.
Waiting and watching as time goes by.
Feeling unable to move from pain.
Wanting to move unwilling to try.
Days gathering in darkened corners.
Greeting reflection I do not know.
Insides hiding letting outsides run the show.
Finally willing to except change.
Feelings of what is to come
Raw nerves and fight comes undone.
Feelings of comfort all warm and content
Feelings of the familiar as if heaven sent
Knowing now what was waiting for a sign
Hardening of the heart keeping the heart blindsnowed in
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Posted: Oct 2010

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jeddah12
very nice poem happy,and nice pics too,,good weekend lasshug bouquet
serpico12
painful poem for you to write, and you did it so beautifully, hoping each day will help you..to find your way to some future happy day..wave
gnj4u
Hi, Happygolucky4u,
I want that door opened to counter Insides hiding letting outsides run the show until the reflection greeted is fully recognizable and the heart beats with "open eyes".
Proudamerican100
"Hardening of the heart keeping the heart blind"crying What a desolate sentence. Hope your days find lightrose
sophiasummer
Wanting to move unwilling to try.

It is in times we wait in anticipation, but so weary and scared to walk forward within an unafraid anticipation.

You write in your write...so true..as
we all look out that window, and hesitant glances we may take,
how to unsoften ones heart

I loved it!
Thankyou Happygolucky

Sophia
hug bouquet
xx
gotitall
i hope the door opens, love and understanding, can oil many hinges, happygolucky.
Ladybee42
when you reopen the heart all the pain has to be processed that you blocked out - there is no easy way to get over our tragedies..
dunno hug hug bouquet bouquet
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