The night was very dark and deep As I danced along the edge of sleep I grasp the knocker on dream's door And wait till I can wait no more Body and mind surrenders and slumbers And my dream self is left to lumber Perplexed, being neither here nor there Confused at being everywhere Drifting in memories, sifting through time With this dreamy hourglass of mine The Nightmare Man wanders close nearby Waiting to show me his next big surprise My dream self starts to feel some fear With a gasp I realize he is here I feel him although he's not in sight My dream body froze refusing to take flight He whispers and caresses along my cheek Tells me of the sadness he seeks For he will forever haunt my dreams Reminding me nothing is what it seems
Kat! so nice to see you back...and in splendid form! A great idea, and the end line is a favorite of mine...is it good...or bad...hmmmm ;-)
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAOct 10, 2010
"and wait till i can wait no more"...perfect feeling captured. feeding on sadness...interesting concept. it's a great poem, really!
KatfightOPAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaOct 10, 2010
agoodguytohave! I didn't realize I was stealing your ending sorry. And thankyou Gashly
gotitallDungarvan, Waterford IrelandOct 10, 2010
loved this kat, as i love all things of darkness, fed my soul, thank you, i will have a word with my friend the nightmare man, see if i can get you a week off.
KatfightOPAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaOct 11, 2010
Thankyou gotitall and freeatlast. I love all the darkness stuff too and I'll keep absorbing for you freeatlast lol
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKOct 11, 2010
Brilliant story Katfight, and well written too, I liked this one.....Andrew.....xxx
KatfightOPAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaOct 11, 2010
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feeding on sadness...interesting concept. it's a great poem, really!
nothing is what it seems......
if you can't trust...
what is there left..
Niah
CJ