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H'Luanah

Ocean laying calm,
Of windless balm,
Foaming, Gliding,
Skimming, Diving,
Speed in Concord,
Gravity defying!
Forever, flowing , Aura’d locks,
Shimmering,
Ghostly folded golden light,
Emotion, vigour, life,
Shining bright,
Changing hue, yet truly spoke,
Through eyes, deep of purest blue.
Like, acoustic, amplified,
Simplified through depth,
Flick of tail,
Out of water leapt,
Beauty incarnate, in time, Pre-Dawn,
H’Luanah!
Not of mans story, through ages downlaid,
MERMAID!
Of Supernature borne!
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Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
second in supernature........"dreamweaver the poems".....Andrewxxx

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Comments (12)

Gashly
andrew, you write of fantastic depth...in the way not many can...stories, vivid, in few words. can't wait to read the 3rd installment of this.
gotitall
methinks, all women may be a form of mermaid, mystical in there moods, beyond the reasoning of men, lovely poem andrew.
aware3
Andrew you are definitely without a doubt- A Poet's Poet ! What and incredibly crafted poem ! Blessings, aware3wave
agoodguy2have
andrew, guess i missed the 1st and will have to backtrack more. I can see her on that distant shore...waving her tail ;-)
freeatlast64847
These are awesome! Here's to her! beer
andrew149
Thankyou Gashly, pleased you like them, will post it later today......Andrew....xxxcool
jeddah12
iam a mermaid of my own dear,,tantalizing poem,,aaahh my imagination is working again,,i love itcheers applause
Redex
Here we go again Andrew I just promise myself to visit site less and out pops your writing, hooked again, brought a much needed grin thankyouteddybear
andrew149
Thankyou Gotitall, you may be right in what you say.....Andrewcool
andrew149
Hi Aware, It really is good to see you, where have you been hiding, it's been an awful long time, no matter, are you going to post some?....That would be good too......Andrew....xxxcool
caroljoyce
Incredible vibration, beautiful, inspired by spirit maybe.
CJ
gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
I spent this past weekend at the beach with Ocean laying calm...Shining bright, Changing hue. The house I rented was decorated with mermaid images and I could feel the presence of H'Luanah in the gentle breeze. Thanks for sharing your Supernature borne gifts with us.
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