kind woman?

she said it was fantastic
but I think she was lying
so...here I float
and ponder...
am I sleeping with a liar
or am I fantastic
hmm...
maybe she's a fantastic liar
and I'm a lousy lover?
or lucky lover...
to find a good liar to sleep with
so...there it is
right? I've found what?
must we question every single circumstance?
I don't know...just let me get some sleep...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2010
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or is fantastic* a step down? watch that first step...

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jeddah12
laugh watch your step sir,dont fall,otherwise you might find another liarlaugh thanks for the humor you put in here,thumbs up wine grin
freeatlast64847
Accept the compliment and assume it was sincere. It's a confidence booster and that makes you a better lover. Sleep helps too... beer
trurorob
clever use of words my friend!
Rob
Redex
Loved these clever words, Now had you been drinkinglaugh
Gashly
hedi, if she's not in tears, you must be doing something right...or wrong, if one's into that sort of thing. fantastic write, now have a drink and go to sleep.
Earlgreytea
Aaahhh, Hedi, who cares? At the end of the day, the question is: did YOU enjoy yourself?
Nice one...
caroljoyce
Perhaps she did not have much to compare it to; theory of relativity.

CJ
hedistuff
Hell, I don't begin til 3 AM...and somebody with initials CJ is a smartass...Lyn said that, 'cause she enjoys that 'person's' humor. they must be twin daughters from different cousins or sumpin' like dat. dave, sorry I missed your call.
gnj4u
Hi, hedistuff,
I think one should stop pondering, keep floating, and BELIEVE! Then, get some sleep! Enjoyed the warning!
Ladybee42
she really said - 'That was so fantastic - i'm exhausted' the fact that you missed all the other words spoken only means one thing, you are getting old dude.. rolling on the floor laughing
but old means experienced - hence the fantastic - lucky old man!
laugh laugh bouquet
superman30
try the second round'' and see with what she comes up...after.thumbs up
andrew149
Brilliant humour as always Hedi....Thankyou.....Andrew....dancing
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