Towards the Inside

For in my

"Now"

My solitude sits so serenely

To be away from, detached from,
is truly me and you

And that's ok

A raw sadness of longing
sits

and that's ok

To be alone
to sweep those memories into our souls

Then only then can we begin to love ourselves

Out there
is many a different journey

I do not keep to the path
merely look out towards the sunrise and the sunset

Nature growth
embraces and surrounds this life
Look at the colors she lays before you

We forget we also are nature
what colors do you radiate out?

A life bestowed on us

Cobbled yet smooth at times

lessor,familiar
the jagged pathways

When no lifesaver in sight

Now

Sighting pathways around those holes

as we do

It
Always
Was

the Central Point

"Ourselves"

SS
xx

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Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
suns gone down..moon arising

A cool spring evening of mental rambling
SS
xx

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Comments (28)

Gashly
here, moon goes down, sun rising...good night, soph! lol! do not keep to the path, in the NOW...in the now, we make our own. radiating colors, every one. even better when those same colors reflect back from another soul...the lifesaver.

just magnificent...the central point!

no swearing today, just more love hug and more flowers bouquet
gotitall
memories, togetherness, parting, sweeping away the old, new growth, of new love, reflective solitude, is needed, its called living, by any other name, lovely poem, sophia.
jeddah12
very nice poem from you always sophia,,i like it,thanks for the nice read i hadwine bouquet
serpico12
another great piece of writing sophia.your descriptive skill is so great to see..brilliant..thumbs up
ginger1959
Beautiful Poempurple heart
Loved reading it...

Truly,
Gingerangel
Happygolucky4u
Very nicely written.bouquet
cafetwo2010
A masterpiece of describing those sublime 'reflections'. And written with love sophia..heart1
freeatlast64847
We are all at the center of our own universes, but at points the universes touch. Told with great style as always, Sophia. wine
hedistuff
ooh...love the 'what colors do you radiate out?'...now I wonder if the radiater would view...the same hue...? many of your entries are so wonderful...so creative...
trurorob
lovely poem SS!, I can imagine the "Central Point" of it all!
rob x
Macduff5
You have big gallery of fans so I don't need to comment. But if you read it several times you get the message I think of an inner mind at work. Cheers.
wayne34
nice poem well doneteddybear
sophiasummer
Sweet Gashly!
Thank
you!
I smile!

"Radiate" such a soothing expression

Sophia
xx
More love
hug
more flowersbouquet
sophiasummer
Thank you Ben!
your comments enveloped what I wrote
you have a great way of piecing order

Sophia
xx
sophiasummer
Hi Jedda!wave
I'm so glad you enjoyed my write!
all our poems, writes, weave within each other
xx

Thank
you Jedda

Sophia
xx
bouquet
sophiasummer
Hello Serpico!

I thank you, I just love to write

Sophia
xx
sophiasummer
Hey! Happygolucky!

Thank you so much! for coming in and having a read!
your comments and beautiful flowers brightened my day more!
Sophia
xx
bouquet
wave
sophiasummer
Hello Cafe!
What can I say,"thank you" rests beautifully

So
"Thank you"

It is

Sophia
xx
wine
sophiasummer
Hi FAL!

Great to see you!
Nice insight!

Thank you

Musician, Poet guy!


SS
xx
cool
sophiasummer
Hello hedistuff!

Thank you
I am humbled
by your words

...now I wonder if the radiater would view...the same hue...?


Mayhap, Its within the uniqueness of the colors


Sophia
xx
sophiasummer
Kind thanks Rob!

Central point

Thank you for your comments......
xx

handshake
grin

Sophia

kiss
caroljoyce
Wonderful SS write, inner wisdom describes inner wisdom. Ourselves is where it is at. Beautifully expressed,
CJ
agoodguy2have
ramble away oh poetic woman, you brush your style like no other, and ourselves is all that's left. ;-)
sophiasummer
Hello Wayne!
I thank you!
I smile!

SS
xx
sophiasummer
Hello Mcduff!

Yes, the "corner" is a mystique of all magnificent poets, "the unraveling", I say!...

aahhhhhhhhh "the inner mind"

there's a write dwelling in there

I await your write mcduff

I, will comment

SS
xx.
wine

For the love of Poetry
sophiasummer
Hello CJ!
Your comments, surrounded in wisdom, I so thank you CJ!
tis you have, a beautiful,delightful energy,
I soak that in

Sophia
xx
bouquet
sophiasummer
Hi aggth!
You are too kind...blushing

We all have our own uniqueness, you know that.
I thank you, for seeing mine

Bless to you and yours!

SS
xx
wine
pilgrimageoflove
We forget we also are nature
what colors do you radiate out?


You radiate bright colors
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