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Rambling

If.......
I cry, does anyone hear the pain?
I laugh, does anyone hear the joy?

When.....
I talk, does anyone listen?
I reach, does anyone reach back?

Do......
I plead, with your heart?
I ask, of your intentions?

Have.....
I gotten, what I need?
I made, a good decision?

Can.....
I give, of myself to another?
I make, a gift to you?

The dreams that come unto me as ethereal as the mist,
Beckon to my soul and give me hope that one day,
I will love again.
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Posted: Oct 2010
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Rambling thoughts.....

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Comments (18)

Redex
With such ramblings amahlala seek and I am sure you will find. teddybear
amahlala
hug Thanks Redex...just weird stuff that comes from my dreams....
gotitall
such passion, cannot be caged, it is part of being human, to need to love, you will love again, rambling thoughts, not withstanding, what a joy to read poem, amahlala.
amahlala
Thank you Gotitall....bouquet
Gashly
the answer: yes. to all. ramble on, amahlala...and dream, as well. lovely inner thoughts of questioning, at least you dare to question. i fear most people don't. bouquet
DaBomb72
Damn you Amahlala...nice piece of work, woman ! Nice...very nice !

Respect !cheers
cafetwo2010
beautiful ramblings 'amahlala'. Without hope..where would we be.? It is in the face of adversity that gives hope it's special sheen.. Without the negative the positive would have no meaning.cafe' gift bouquet
amahlala
@Gashly...thanks! Sometimes my ramblings make sense...bouquet
@DaBomb...Appreciate the comments...bouquet
@Cafe...Interesting...thank youbouquet
sophiasummer
Beckon to my soul and give me hope that one day,
I will love again.


Hello Amahlala!

Rambling, ahhh yes! carefree at "peace" or confusion, even in confusion, each run that sexy path, its just that its all new....... we all get eager...that's ok

Lovely write Amahala!

Sophia
xx
bouquet
amahlala
Thank you Sophia...my ramblings help me see me betterbouquet
freeatlast64847
Nice one! Well written, great thoughts. wine
sophiasummer
Yes, its the greatest way!
Very true sweetheart!

Keep smiling!

Sophia
thumbs up bouquet
xx
gnj4u
Hi, amahlala,
ethereal as the mist, May dreams always Beckon love. When the poet speaks, we listen.
jeddah12
keep rambling deary,we are always here listeninggrin well penned deary and very well said..thanks for sharingbouquet
trurorobonline today!
Keep rambling Lala
rob
boyshchrm6
Very organized Ramblings Amahlala...la..la
If I slam my hand in the car door
Will anyone give a darn and get out
of bed to help me........nada doh bouquet
serpico12
well thought out poem..full of thought..from wondering to hope..great work..wave
amahlala
Thank you everyone! Big Squeenchie Hugshug bouquet
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