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if I could but bottle your sweet words of love
their nectar to taste, time and again
no longer more would I be afraid
filled eternal of strength from a friend

for your touch to linger evermore
from your fingers to deep in my heart
shall envelop and carry me safely
never again, will we be apart

were your smile always before me
a beacon, to show me the way
I'd never lose faith in my journey
each new step...a beautiful day

hope and happiness, hand in hand
will ever grow when I am with you
for around this world, in every land
is fierce love and spirit that's true

I am so grateful that I got to meet you
and felt the essence of you to be found
for I'm a better man now and forever
by just knowing that you are around

thank you...hedi
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
everyone here is amazing...what wonderful feeling you give me..

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Ladybee42
aha! but you know you showed us how to be this way? oh great american master of the mind in rhyme - laugh laugh and pleased to meet you too sir...so very pleased hug bouquet wine
keesy45
THe stars in the night
That we never had seen
It is because it is not enoug dark
To see their light...
That's frienship my friend!
Enjoy it..cheers
Redex
Wow what a wonderful poem Hedi, so glad I popped in tonight better mood already teddybear
Gashly
aawww jeez man, that bright moon and those 2 comets in the heavens right now are turning everyone to sweet tree sap! laugh hedi, you write from an angle even my tilted head has to pause and think about, so thanks, yo. respect the words, feel the emotions, cherish the thoughts...it's what poets dare to dream. bloody love-in around here, notwithstanding. laugh cheers <--sunday brew?
trurorob
And our old friends Hedi, now departed, although some are best left there, ay!, nice write
rob
hedistuff
yes...our old friends....miss you ssheerd, debbie, nebraska, et al...
Happygolucky4u
Wow I loved this. The lay out of the words. The dancing of the words.daydream


teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, hedistuff,
if I could but bottle your sweet words of love their nectar to taste is something we could well say about you and your loving spirit. Thank you!
agoodguy2have
hedi...you 'n rob and andrew and more, where here to start it to build word by word, thought by thought, all that is here now, the great stuff, and the ill will that occasionally pops up, no matter, it's all good to read and good to be known, but rest assured, it's (as Chicago says) "only the beginning....only the beginning..." much good to come. And you are there! ;-)
freeatlast64847
It's a love-in on the Corner! Let's all put flowers in our hair and read poetry to each other! I know what you mean though, the coraderie here bolsters the spirit and inspires creativity. Nice write! wine
jeddah12
well penned and well said.a truly poem words from a master of poets..thanks twas awesome sircheers
BellaTheRebel48
hedistuff, what an absolute lovely poem. You make us here in the Poet's Corner feel very special indeed. Love it! Just love it!cheering teddybear
Pinkpoetress
Hedi,
Great poem. We should be thanking you. Your talented words are always a joy for me to read. Take care.
cafetwo2010
You're world class 'hedi! Thank you..I'm just a new pup..lol cafetwo..cheers wine wine wine thumbs up thumbs up thumbs up
1234ab
Hedi,words tell about caracters of persons,and it seems here u have a deep heart full of romance,love,friendship,a deep heart.
We wish to know always :"that u are around",thanks for sharing friend hedi.
Earlgreytea
Flattery will get you everywhere Hedi, laugh thanks , my friend, today, i have no words of 'wisdom' only to say that i 'see' you, in the African way...
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