if I could but bottle your sweet words of love their nectar to taste, time and again no longer more would I be afraid filled eternal of strength from a friend
for your touch to linger evermore from your fingers to deep in my heart shall envelop and carry me safely never again, will we be apart
were your smile always before me a beacon, to show me the way I'd never lose faith in my journey each new step...a beautiful day
hope and happiness, hand in hand will ever grow when I am with you for around this world, in every land is fierce love and spirit that's true
I am so grateful that I got to meet you and felt the essence of you to be found for I'm a better man now and forever by just knowing that you are around
thank you...hedi
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Posted: Oct 2010
About this poem:
everyone here is amazing...what wonderful feeling you give me..
THe stars in the night That we never had seen It is because it is not enoug dark To see their light... That's frienship my friend! Enjoy it..
RedexNorthumberland, England UKOct 24, 2010
Wow what a wonderful poem Hedi, so glad I popped in tonight better mood already
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USAOct 24, 2010
aawww jeez man, that bright moon and those 2 comets in the heavens right now are turning everyone to sweet tree sap! hedi, you write from an angle even my tilted head has to pause and think about, so thanks, yo. respect the words, feel the emotions, cherish the thoughts...it's what poets dare to dream. bloody love-in around here, notwithstanding. <--sunday brew?
Hi, hedistuff, if I could but bottle your sweet words of love their nectar to taste is something we could well say about you and your loving spirit. Thank you!
hedi...you 'n rob and andrew and more, where here to start it to build word by word, thought by thought, all that is here now, the great stuff, and the ill will that occasionally pops up, no matter, it's all good to read and good to be known, but rest assured, it's (as Chicago says) "only the beginning....only the beginning..." much good to come. And you are there! ;-)
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USAOct 24, 2010
It's a love-in on the Corner! Let's all put flowers in our hair and read poetry to each other! I know what you mean though, the coraderie here bolsters the spirit and inspires creativity. Nice write!
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeOct 24, 2010
well penned and well said.a truly poem words from a master of poets..thanks twas awesome sir
hedistuff, what an absolute lovely poem. You make us here in the Poet's Corner feel very special indeed. Love it! Just love it!
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USAOct 25, 2010
Hedi, Great poem. We should be thanking you. Your talented words are always a joy for me to read. Take care.
cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland USAOct 25, 2010
You're world class 'hedi! Thank you..I'm just a new pup..lol cafetwo..
1234abDoha, QatarOct 25, 2010
Hedi,words tell about caracters of persons,and it seems here u have a deep heart full of romance,love,friendship,a deep heart. We wish to know always :"that u are around",thanks for sharing friend hedi.
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusNov 21, 2010
Flattery will get you everywhere Hedi, thanks , my friend, today, i have no words of 'wisdom' only to say that i 'see' you, in the African way...
Comments (16)
That we never had seen
It is because it is not enoug dark
To see their light...
That's frienship my friend!
Enjoy it..
rob
if I could but bottle your sweet words of love their nectar to taste is something we could well say about you and your loving spirit. Thank you!
Great poem. We should be thanking you. Your talented words are always a joy for me to read. Take care.
We wish to know always :"that u are around",thanks for sharing friend hedi.