pondering

waiting patiently
living day by day
learning
watching
waiting
getting old with time
memories
memories affect my mind
yesterday
yesterday was years ago
full of love
ego ,inspiration
exploration ,intimidation
life was good
revelation ,innovation
music
friendships ,disorder
dancing and heartbreak
heartbreak
sharper than any blade
that girl took my heart
killed my soul
i was buried humble and broken
memories
made me stronger
lifted me out my emotional grave
no hate
spiritual frustration
fighting ,searching ,praying
for understanding
to God my memories levitate
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Oct 2010
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cafetwo2010
Teagly..Very powerful..a list with hope! cafe'thumbs up thumbs up thumbs up
Redex
Simple writing but so strong message of searching, enjoyed thanyou for sharinghandshake
hugh1
nice excogitation! roll eyes I can't pronounce it...mumbling
hugh1
nice excogitation! roll eyes I can't pronounce it...mumbling
gnj4u
Hi, Teagly1971,
pondering the Lazarus effect of your life poem that levitates the spirit. Welcome back!
Teagly1971
Thank you CafeTwo. your opinions are appreciated......
Teagly1971
Thank you Redex . I have not tried to express myself with poetry since 1992 ,thanks for your opinion it is appreciated .
Teagly1971
Hugh1, thankyou........
Teagly1971
GNJ4U, THANK YOU VERY MUCH FOR YOUR COMMENTS, YOU HAVE MADE ME LOOK AT THE WAY I WRITE IN A DIFFERENT MANNER, SEE THINGS THAT I DID NOT NOTICE. THANKYOUbouquet
sophiasummer
ego ,inspiration
exploration ,intimidation
life was good
revelation ,innovation
music
friendships ,disorder
dancing and heartbreak
heartbreak


Hi Teagly

The beautiful uniqueness of us all is in our own "sway", you sway well!

may you dance through your pages of penning, take no heed in hesitation, your calmness is within your write, your words a deep insight to you, who, has seen.... graceful actually.


Sophia
xx

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trurorob
nice poetic depth here!
rob
Teagly1971
Thank you Trurorob i appreciate you comments.
iluvisis1
poignant, intense free flowing thought ...nice!
iluvisis1
poignant, intense free flowing thought ...nice!
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