proximity

where'd you go? standing there i saw you a minute ago, my words, my expression my fateful confession, wasn't so bad, past bad times i've had, now i know why you're mad, i'm doin my best please don't contest, it's a road you've not walked, an one yes i've talked, see it my way, in hopes then you'll stay, it's not meant to be mean, it's all that i've seen, teach me away, then maybe you'll stay, i'm alone in this thought with something forgot, yet it's not a forgot, it's a think i've not thought!
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Posted: Aug 2009
About this poem:
At times we've got to stand out side our own circle an look within:)

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Comments (12)

amahlala
wave crying good one........
Bentlee
Ah my pool girl lol ty. Yeah i liked writing that one. :)
amahlala
very nice...but blues crying
Like it thoughcool
Bentlee
Autographed copy lol. :) Dam i don't even have one a them for me lol.
amahlala
Autographed copy......Okay! Let me just print this one out! lolgrin
Bentlee
You've got water on both sides eh, an front an back too, i'll sign it but it's the water not ink drip lol.
amahlala
If I use a hair dryer....would it dry it off?dunno
Bentlee
Lol it just may, dam gotta hate a drip, gets in the way of good things to say .
gypsyheart
thumbs up
Bentlee
:) yeah i like this one too!
poetengineer
beleive me very beautiful lovely words cause it is coming from true kind heart u have , in fact i like it and effect with it , thanks for share
Bentlee
I'm learning when the hearts open, what comes out is as good as what the open heart lets in:)
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