when you have a reason to get out of bed or when you have a reason to stay there can tend to clear the mind instead of leaving the soul in wanton despair
the higher purpose of our lowly fate experience is our greatest educator to touch and feel to know and relate a useful life our finest demonstrator
into our soulful gate we slowly saunter and ask what is soul and what is mind to live our lives of thought and wonder being a Gordian knot tightly intertwined
we are only able to do the best we can but that is our light to bring to our being to be keeper of brother and friend to man to see with our own eyes what others are seeing
upon reflection, a heart-filled introspection as seconds go quickly here, chances bringing love shows our natural ability to change direction ups-n-downs merry-go-round catch brass ringing
under some blue skies we lay down dreamily minds gently wander around consciousness pointedly watching clouds breeze by lazily as life proceeds toward serene happiness
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaNov 1, 2010
Good one gg...like all good poems it conveys universal truths
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USANov 1, 2010
Very Zen! Kudos!
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 1, 2010
very beautiful morning to ponder or let that imagination wonder somewhere till you doze off to sleep again.lol,,excellent write and i love reading it,,very nice ,thanks for sharing this
PinkpoetressClarksburg, West Virginia USANov 1, 2010
Amazing again. I'd hate to see you if you weren't dozing!
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USANov 1, 2010
i have sauntered that same way, many times, goodguy. keep reaching for that brass ring...ing. heh. have seen much enlightenment in the clouds, especially under the full moon's eye. serenity, put to words...you have yoda skills, truly.
amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USANov 1, 2010
Wonderful read GG2H!
Swan87Syria, QatarNov 1, 2010
Bravo GoodGuy .. BRAVO
Swan
RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 1, 2010
A wonderful doze too, have done that many times last first that is. Enjoyed the whole piece goodguy
we are only able to do the best we can..and we always should give our best...very nice write goodguy..thanks iam
niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 1, 2010
What a wonderful way to start the day...someone puts all those things you think about, but never focus directly on...into verse. Thanks for enlightening my day good guy, as I prepare to volunteer at the library...with kids everywhere, and no time to even ponder.... Niah
into our soulful gate we slowly saunter and ask what is soul and what is mind to live our lives of thought and wonder being a Gordian knot tightly intertwined
My friend...your verse and poem captivates me!
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKNov 12, 2010
Entranced by this tender spiritual write of life's purpose.The last stanza is especially beautiful, CJ
such self-awareness goodguy...sure that you're not one of them shrinking head people. what's a Gordian knot? that's not somethin' a doctor did to me, is it?
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusNov 21, 2010
[Gordian knot ] wow, Goodguy, this phrase 'made' the whole poem for me, thank you, very nice write, my friend...
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Swan
Enjoyed the whole piece goodguy
Thanks for enlightening my day good guy, as I prepare to volunteer at the library...with kids everywhere, and no time to even ponder....
Niah
that cloud looks like a it has your name written all over it. Nice write as life proceeds toward serene happiness!
and ask what is soul and what is mind
to live our lives of thought and wonder
being a Gordian knot tightly intertwined
My friend...your verse and poem captivates me!
CJ