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Bentlee

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Nov 2010 736 Views 18 comments

Take a chance

Author: Bentlee
Lady Lady rise above the wave
Lady Lady show me how you care

Lady Lady where have you been till now
Lady Lady eyes like blue soft sky

LIVING YOUR DAYS AS WE ALL SEEM TO DO
GOOD DAYS AN BAD, A DAY AT A TIME

Lady Lady your cheeks light up your smile
Lady Lady warm wind lift's your hair

Lady Lady golden sheen tanned skin
Lady Lady men watch you walk on by

WORKING A DAY JOB, ONLINE SCHOOL AT NIGHT
AN HELP WITH HOMEWORK OF YOUR EIGHT YEAR OLD GIRL

Lady Lady rise above the wave, Lady Lady, it's you my mind desires. Lady Lady your eyes have not seen mine, Lady Lady I'm not so bad a guy. Lady Lady if you saw me would you be....willing to take a chance, take a chance with me.
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Posted: Nov 2010
About this poem:
trying something different, yeah she's fictional lol. Cheers all.

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Comments (18)

amahlala
amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USANov 1, 2010
A uniquely different write for you Jon! I liked it...beautiful!bouquet
Bentlee
BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 1, 2010
lol ty Ama, truth be said I started writing this in 1986 and shelfed it till tonight. It started as a song write back in the day. Did some editing tonight tho. Cheers Ama and ty.hug
freeatlast64847
freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USANov 1, 2010
Luck be a lady, tonight! Nice One, kudos! beer
Bentlee
BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 1, 2010
ty Free, it felt good to open this back up after about 24 years and put a dot on the end. applause
jeddah12
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 1, 2010
yeh,lady he is not so bad,lol..excellent poem bentlee,ty for sharingwine purple heart
luvuluvme2
luvuluvme2Smith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 2, 2010
Hi bentlee, nice one and so different then your usual write. I like it.angel thumbs up
Redex
RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 2, 2010
I CAN HERE THE TUNE OF A SONG LADY?? FROM LONG AGO WILL LOOK IT UP, LIKE THE NEW STYLEteddybear
jazzy75
jazzy75Houston, Texas USANov 2, 2010
Bentlee...a beautiful journey that took over 2 decades. May you be blessed with the chance of a lifetimegift
Bentlee
BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 2, 2010
ty Jeddda for your kind words, Glad you enjoyed my write. hug
BellaTheRebel48
BellaTheRebel48Minneapolis, Minnesota USANov 2, 2010
Bentlee, I sincerely hope you find the 'Lady' that will "Take a chance." Loved it!!wave
Bentlee
BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 2, 2010
hi Luvu yeah it is different in style eh, ty and glad you commented, trying different styles lately. hug
Bentlee
BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 2, 2010
Hi Redex, yeah there is a song like that, pls let me know what you find, ty for commenting and glad you liked it.conversing
Earlgreytea
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusNov 3, 2010
soft, yet powerful, what we're all looking for...
Bentlee
BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 3, 2010
Jazzy....Been along time eh. Ty for your comment and your wishes good too see you and glad all's well hug
Bentlee
BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 3, 2010
Hi Bella, ty for your kind thoughts and wishes. Happy you enjoyed the write. hug
Bentlee
BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 3, 2010
Ty Earl for your kind words.... cheers. cheers
marikia
marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaNov 20, 2010
Words flow like music, very pleasant, enjoyable, read it several times. Is there a composer to write music?
Bentlee
BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 20, 2010
ty Marikia.....yeah some music would be good to enhance the words eh lol. cheers
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