seldom do we hold one another...imagining if this is the beginning or the end it may be the same...for all we know so we merely ponder, have I found a friend? I've never entered a relationship wondering...is this my special one? it has never, ever, ocurred to me to try to brand a friendship, over or begun for the most part, if you are nice to me, I like you it's easy...we all crave and treasure warm kindness seems I always write too much into ...an ocassional likemindness sometimes latching on, or latching less disrupts the spirits flow we can't move on, we just digress our aims apart, our passions slow so what may have begun... ...in honest attraction may be quickly squelched ...by overreaction we have no roadmap no directions to follow falling into detour our words ring hollow fear yanks us away from that which we seek pride only grants us the bluster confused, we take the easy way out alone..again..is all that we muster
wow hedi...a great groove with rhymes and wisdom. i am happy to call you a friend. Yes you are so right, it's sooo easy to pull away thinking we know an ending we can't even see. we humans are really an odd bunch i think. ;-) that most definitely includes ME!
This poem is great, it confirms to me what I have learned so far and inspires a fresh way of thinking in regards to anything in life. Thanks..Mike.
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandNov 2, 2010
"We all crave and treasure warm kindness" dont we hedi,my dear,though I do not stay a lot in touch but have considered you a friend,you are a sweet soul.Nice thoughts hedi.
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusNov 3, 2010
"I've never entered a relationship wondering...is this my special one? it has never, ever, ocurred to me to try to brand a friendship,"
Hedi, this piece of advice is SUBLIME!!! thank you my friend for giving me a perspective i never thought of before, brilliant!!! I shall practice this from now on, the taoists call it 'wu-wei', action thru non-action...
keesy45oldenburg, Lower Saxony GermanyNov 3, 2010
Confused ..we all take the easy way..why do we begin...?.why do we slow..?.. Nice poem..and true..
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roadmap,,says it all to me,,
life is a journey for sure!!
LOVELY POEM!!!!!!
Truly,
Ginger
This poem is great, it confirms to me what I have learned so far and inspires a fresh way of thinking in regards to anything in life. Thanks..Mike.
wondering...is this my special one?
it has never, ever, ocurred to me
to try to brand a friendship,"
Hedi, this piece of advice is SUBLIME!!! thank you my friend for giving me a perspective i never thought of before, brilliant!!! I shall practice this from now on, the taoists call it 'wu-wei', action thru non-action...
Nice poem..and true..