fictional dreamin.........or is it!

eyes jumpin out of your mind thats in blurr
scared breath, rides the air as you struggle to be
it's not yours, how can it be, it's never this way
you fondle your mind for resolution of sorts

cajun heat body steams within your realm
where it began will the rooster crow soon
feet toss an turn for a way to escape
sheets are tucked in they're goin nowhere

you think you're awake in this fantasy scare
it's real and it's now as pillows in tight
pillow and cheek share a river of drool
as your mind finds a way to set your night free

so real as it is you'll never forget
your eyes went to sleep an it started from there
ur callin for friends they don't hear a sound
feet still in quiver in blankets they're bound

you've got to go pee, no it's not about this
blankets are wet from a self induced sweat
adrenaline pours into your dream
it's not what it is, just what it seems

charlie horse breaks into both of your calves
breath shoots like darts over your bed
your mind plays it over an over again
a nightmare gone wrong from start to the end!
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Posted: Nov 2010

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Comments (8)

agoodguy2have
bentlee, sounds like a bad round of slumber...or is it? ;-)
Bentlee
lol good guy do you ever sleep......or do you rolling on the floor laughing ty for reading an commenting cheers
luvuluvme2
Hi Bentlee, you can't control your nightmares but you can control your dreams...eh?angel tip hat daydream
Gashly
good grief...have had this dream...and that double charlie horse...NOTHING will get you straight up out of bed faster, i don't care if the house is on fire or not...that pain is straight from god. ok, not reliving the nightmare...better slumber for you, bentlee...and a fine piece of words!
Redex
Yes sometimes we get tied up in a circle with no way out, dreams disapear, but!!!cheers
Bentlee
lol Luvu, I'm not sure I can control either lol.....well maybe if I never sleep I could conversing
Bentlee
Gashly how'd you do that ...... it's not out on dvd yet lol. I wrote this in recall from a reoccuring dream that was more nightmare, when I was under ten years old. Not so sure why, but the feeling and memory of it is still somewhat fresh. ty for commenting. applause
Bentlee
Red sounds like you've experienced them too. Yeah nothing worse then being stuck in a bad dream. Ty for commenting. cheers
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