Into Eternity

by cafetwo2010Harford county, Maryland, USA

Nov 2010 1,608 Views 23 comments

Into Eternity

Author: cafetwo2010

Walk into eternity
adorned with imortality

Stripped of flesh
and bone, this
primitive reality

Mind dimensions
unknown
Spirit transcending
time

Consciousness awakening
from itself
With its memory
left behind

Infinity is just
a moment, as long
as forever hangs
around

Eternity is but
a broken clock..
The only game
in town~

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Nov 2010

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freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USANov 5, 2010

Very profound cafe!

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 5, 2010

Thanks free'.. Does anybody know what time it is? lol. cafe

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKNov 5, 2010

Abput now with a good watch...lol....interesting poem Cafe.....Thankyou....Andrew.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 6, 2010

Thanks andrew.. I was going to make it longer but it would have taken an eternity.lol cafe

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 6, 2010

amahlala.Thanks dear..I'm not sure darling, but if I travel the loop it'll take me forever to give you the answer.lol. cafe

CHEZKAHONIEorchard, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 6, 2010

very inspiring poem sir.ty

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 6, 2010

Thank you chez..Glad you liked it.cafe

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 6, 2010

hhmmmm,,infinity is just a moment long as forever hangs,,,very inspiring indeed,,well done cafe and thanks

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 6, 2010

Thanks jeddah dear..I think I only confused myself even more.lol. cafe

kickit22auburn, Washington USANov 6, 2010

When ever your confused just close your eyes and wonder about IT.

Another perfect write cafe.

kickit22auburn, Washington USANov 6, 2010

When ever your confused just close your eyes and wonder about IT.

Another perfect write cafe.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 6, 2010

Tick Tock, Tick Tock Show me the door cafe into eternity. Loved this take, infinity is just a moment as long as it hangs around
great lines.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 6, 2010

thanks kick..'I'm fascinated with the time' subject.. cafe'

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USANov 6, 2010

thanks Redex.. That was my tic tock poem.lol. cafe

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusNov 14, 2010

I reckon you captured it very nicely, loved it, thanks for sharing...

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 7, 2011

"Walk into eternity, adorned with immortality",
"Infinity is just a moment, as long as forever hangs around" -
Just wonderful!!

(I think I read this before & had a hard time wrapping my brain around it... reading it now, I really get it... guess it took a long time to sink in w/o me even knowing it - but I'll have a better brain in eternity

)

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaFeb 7, 2011

Certainly food for thought.Profound
and good metaphors.

cafetwo2010OPHarford county, Maryland USAJul 18, 2016

Oldies but goodies.
Cafe

lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales AustraliaOct 13, 2017

RIP Jim, you're in eternity now mate. I guess we all are, when you really look at it. Take care - lcbr...

godsprincessOwego, New York USAOct 13, 2017

Definitely. There is no clock or time (forever is the only game in town) in God's realm - He created time when he created the Universe. Cafe Jim will go on forever and ever. We are only here on Earth in the time zone for a brief while and then there is no time, pain or worry! Thanks Jim for your wise words while you were with u - we miss you!

Kathy