The Short Death

Splendor short lived set the standard
Parting again established the pain.
Re-uniting soon sets the pace.
A pace to somehow keep us sane.

life is changing before our eyes.
Never again to be what we knew
And the trials we face we must embrace
They combine the me and the you.

So for a while we have space
A lonely and requisite space.
That keeps things aright as they must be
''Til we're both living in the same place.

It's coming, my love, so help me, God.
It's coming as sure as I breathe.
There's no one like you in the world for me
It's a core system of my belief.

Our time is coming and very soon
And nothing can thwart us tomorrow
So all we must do is stick to our guns
And weather short terms of sweet sorrow.
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Posted: Nov 2010
About this poem:
These are troubling times but times full of incredible promise. Despite the ups and downs I feel incredibly blessed.

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niah9
I've learnt the hardway, that nothing worthwhile comes easy...pain and strife does make one appreciate, all the more....when you have worked everything thoroughly through and know pitfall and joy...enjoyed your words garden hackle...though.. Niah
Your poem said it all.... teddybear comfort hug wave
freeatlast64847
Hang in there GH, you'll make it. beer wine
sophiasummer
''Til we're both living in the same place.


Hi GH!
Lovely to read your write!, its been awhile!, and such a beautiful write, within that time, you both were and shall always be... yay!!!

You know me GH, I could ramble off a sonnet for you and LadyBee!!!

But just called by, into your poem, as those moments of longing whilst apart again, is just the way it is, right now.

Simple.. no big speel! from me...lol!

Just trying to get my head around mine,lol!

Love Sophia
xx
yay
bouquet
paloma66
Nice to see you here again....where is my dear Ladybee?Loved the last verse...yes if we stick together we can weather short terms of sorrow and I'm sure nothing can thwart our tomorrows.Nice write.My best to you both.thumbs up
boyshchrm6
If we can believe it we can achieve it.
Always good to be optomistic. Thanks
Gardenhackle.thumbs up
jeddah12
excellent write as always gh,tycheers
Gashly
cheers to you both, and to this pledge of love! no doubt many can see themselves in these words...so help us all. stick to the core, and if need be, the GUNS! lol! time is coming, and very soon. space...is relative, yo. awesome, GH!
gotitall
stars are rising, even as the sun goes down, and the moon will light the path, untill the sun rises again, for both of you, lovely poem gardenhackel, walking under that moon, myself at the moment, i kindred spirit. comfort
Ladybee42
While time is a complete nuisance in one way because of the waiting we must do - it won't beat us, nothing will.bouquet bouquet purple heart teddybear
gardenhackle
It was a wonderful trip and much too short. But it won't be the last and it won't be the best! kiss
RevWhiteWolf
Beautiful write as always, Dear Friend. thumbs up hug heart wings
gnj4u
Hi, gardenhackle,
And the trials we face we must embrace They combine the me and the you. Sage advice for long-distance lovers, giving hope to all who remain in the wings.
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