OUT of my mind

whooooosh . . . why'm I layin there when I'm here, night's quiet thru the wall i go, first time out, with the air I flow, wait for me his mind says in rem piled sleep, shh don't wake him, in that room not a sound not a peep, graced flight high above, mental sight flurryed round, how'd this be... on the bed that's ME.... no pull to the ground i'm out of my mind, i'd love to stay, hit the snooze for soon another blessed day!
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Posted: Aug 2009
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How far can a dream take you?

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poetengineer
new different idea show variation in ur write , thanks for share , it is simple nice
Bentlee
Endless words from endless thought :) ty Khaled always appreciate your comment
lucy4u2009
what planet you on - not understand a thing written moping
Bentlee
Lol, thats ok, when you sleep, sometimes it can feel like you've left your body. Thats what i'm trying to convey here cheers lol :)
QuietStormF
A poem that makes one think is a good poem indeed.. teddybear
Bentlee
Ty Q S exactly that, you've hit the nail on the head:)
jazzy75
Bentlee...beautifully expressed. Love it! teddybear
Bentlee
:) ty Jazzy glad you liked it, how it was written is as close to what seemed like an out of body dream I had one night years ago:)
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