falling prey to failure

why would any fall into line?
why do so many lash out in desperation?
how could one whose wounds are so sore...wish to inflict a soreness?
are they justified, that because they hurt, that they may hurt others?
never got that...never understood that
one would think just the opposite...actually
but then, one would have to have thought...
...wouldn't they?
keep thinking!
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Posted: Nov 2010
About this poem:
should difficulty enter our lives, focus upon our selves...

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Redex
So So true hedistuff, liked this a lotpeace cheers
Ladybee42
I know whwat your saying - some people are just that way, but i know the ways I've been hurt I would never do on purpose to others. maybe some people just get so hurt that they don't care any more.
dunno bouquet bouquet
Gashly
hedi...did you meet my sister? laugh

i shall keep thinking, thank you...and you do the same, ya hear?
caroljoyce
They are just inexperienced souls, not yet lit. Very nicely and, may I add, cleverly written,
CJthumbs up
madtat29
Some say treat others as you would like to be treated... some treat others as they are treated...such a huge difference there...drinking
Earlgreytea
I loved this, Hedi, your insight is magnificent... Keep up your encouragement of us all, god knows, we need it...
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