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Burned Out

Looked in your eyes
window too your soul
candles burn
eternal flames glow
holding your hand
your heart and soul
loved you long ago
in my heart and soul
the candles burned out
long ago
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Posted: Nov 2010
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Love that fades away

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freeatlast64847
Sad when love's flame dies... beer
kickit22
Yes indeed! Thank You FAL....
mike7375
I guess nothing lasts forever, great work Kickit cheers
kickit22
Thank you Mike. It sure seems like that. beer
jeddah12
love can last forever if the lovers decide to keep that flame burning forever,,sure nothing is pefect,but can work things out,isnt that supposed to be love is for,,love,care,understanding,honesty,trust and faithfulness to each other can keep that candle burning foever,,,,

so i disagree with your lousy theories,mike and mike kitwine men should be the strong one to handle as he is considered the king of his family..(or,maybe its just my own opinion)cheers

short poem and nicely written kit,,sory to argue,lol,,thanks for shaaringcheers peace teddybear
kickit22
no your not arguing jeddah. i think the point is kind of being missed a little bit this is when two people who use to love each other that has been seperated for long time and they reunite holden each other hand and the feelings just not there as time has moved on. Thank You Jeddah yes you are correct but it is rare. hug
niah9
A very deep felt emotion that led to this kickit22....
No one wants a relationship to end, but to stay in a relaionship when love has left a void...is far worse. That's my opinion anyway....
Niahteddybear
kickit22
Thank You Niah.
Yes even if you know it's for the best it is still hard too let go. the attachments the history but if the love isn't there then it's just not there.. wine
Redex
Can see music to this good onethumbs up
andrew149
In my opinion, a very good poem kickit....thankyou for posting it....Andrew.cool
kickit22
Thank You Red
that is sweet of you.
teddybear


Thank you Andrew
your Thoughtful thoughts mean alot.

beer
serpico12
lovely tender remembrance poem..memories are made of this..really good writing..kickit22thumbs up
doinkclown
reminds me when I went camping and set the tent alive
kickit22
beer

Serpico, Thank You! Even with the burned out flame the memories can be treasured.
kickit22
Thank You for reading Doink.
It's too bad we can't go back to the memories that we hold but time has lost those days that'll never be the same.
Ladybee42
old loves must fade to let the new ones in...bouquet bouquet
kickit22
Yes indeed Ladybee to continue with life have to learn how to let go. Thank you for reading.handshake
caroljoyce
Nice write, kickit. Some flames are just alight for a little while in the scheme of things, I guess.
CJ
ginger1959
Lovely....

Truly,
Gingerteddybear
kickit22
CJ:
Thank You for your comments. It sure does seem like that now days so much pressures of todays world it takes a lot of work to keep the flames burn

Ginger
Thank you your thoughtful thoughts mean alot.


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