Burned Out

by kickit22auburn, Washington, USA

Nov 2010 666 Views 20 comments

Burned Out

Looked in your eyes
window too your soul
candles burn
eternal flames glow
holding your hand
your heart and soul
loved you long ago
in my heart and soul
the candles burned out
long ago

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Posted: Nov 2010

About this poem:

Love that fades away

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freeatlast64847Lanagan, Missouri USANov 13, 2010

Sad when love's flame dies...

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 13, 2010

Yes indeed! Thank You FAL....

mike7375Castleblayney, Monaghan IrelandNov 13, 2010

I guess nothing lasts forever, great work Kickit

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 13, 2010

Thank you Mike. It sure seems like that.

jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 13, 2010

love can last forever if the lovers decide to keep that flame burning forever,,sure nothing is pefect,but can work things out,isnt that supposed to be love is for,,love,care,understanding,honesty,trust and faithfulness to each other can keep that candle burning foever,,,,

so i disagree with your lousy theories,mike and mike kit

men should be the strong one to handle as he is considered the king of his family..(or,maybe its just my own opinion)

short poem and nicely written kit,,sory to argue,lol,,thanks for shaaring

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 13, 2010

no your not arguing jeddah. i think the point is kind of being missed a little bit this is when two people who use to love each other that has been seperated for long time and they reunite holden each other hand and the feelings just not there as time has moved on. Thank You Jeddah yes you are correct but it is rare.

niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 13, 2010

A very deep felt emotion that led to this kickit22....
No one wants a relationship to end, but to stay in a relaionship when love has left a void...is far worse. That's my opinion anyway....
Niah

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 13, 2010

Thank You Niah.
Yes even if you know it's for the best it is still hard too let go. the attachments the history but if the love isn't there then it's just not there..

RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 14, 2010

Can see music to this good one

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKNov 14, 2010

In my opinion, a very good poem kickit....thankyou for posting it....Andrew.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 14, 2010

Thank You Red
that is sweet of you.

Thank you Andrew
your Thoughtful thoughts mean alot.

serpico12cardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKNov 14, 2010

lovely tender remembrance poem..memories are made of this..really good writing..kickit22

doinkclownAdelaide, South Australia AustraliaNov 14, 2010

reminds me when I went camping and set the tent alive

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 14, 2010

Serpico, Thank You! Even with the burned out flame the memories can be treasured.

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 14, 2010

Thank You for reading Doink.
It's too bad we can't go back to the memories that we hold but time has lost those days that'll never be the same.

Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USANov 14, 2010

old loves must fade to let the new ones in...

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 15, 2010

Yes indeed Ladybee to continue with life have to learn how to let go. Thank you for reading.

caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKNov 15, 2010

Nice write, kickit. Some flames are just alight for a little while in the scheme of things, I guess.
CJ

ginger1959Kingston, Ontario CanadaNov 16, 2010

Lovely....

Truly,
Ginger

kickit22OPauburn, Washington USANov 16, 2010

CJ:
Thank You for your comments. It sure does seem like that now days so much pressures of todays world it takes a lot of work to keep the flames burn

Ginger
Thank you your thoughtful thoughts mean alot.

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