Weaning

Cutting back on the drink and the smoke,
The reasons are many, you see.
There's the money and mess and the choke,
It'll make a much better me.

And there's one who I hope to make mine,
Objects to the smell and effects,
Of the vile cigarettes and the wine.
Her wishes I do so respect.

Though withdrawal's gonna be painful,
It's pain I believe I can stand.
Overall results will be gainful,
Of taking my habits in hand.

Addiction's insidious voices,
Try to make you think it's a need,
To make you think there's no choices,
While itself it is trying to feed.

It's my own hands, my lips and my mind,
They're mine to control with my will.
I am sure as I try I will find,
My wish to abstain I'll fulfill.
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Posted: Nov 2010
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Wish me luck!

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Gashly
right there with ya FAL...the weaning off the smokes...is a slow process for me, but i've made great strides this year (almost there!)...cold turkey, couldn't hack it. (no pun intented) as for the drink...can't much relate, could always take it or leave it...but when i took it, there was seemingly no end. yikes. so...GOOD LUCK...you can do it, i know. OH and, nice write about the evils and wanting to improve, you'll feel better, for sure. cheers <--it's frothy tea! grin
mike7375
Great write Free, best of luck with it all. Being smoke free is the best thing I've ever donehandshake
caroljoyce
You will feel so much better for it, dear. Think of your skin and the money you will save!
Have will,
CJconversing
freeatlast64847
Yeah Gashly, mind over matter. GOOD LUCK to us both!
jeddah12
health is wealth and taking care of it will make a life more enjoyable,,its just in the brain and the remote is you,,you can do it friend,,,thats one of the best word i read today,,quiting from smoking,,wow,,,go for it fal,goodluckcheers wine hug
niah9
One day at a time Free....Niahdoh wow yay
marikia
What if I too follow advice Will make me feel better and great I'll never regret starting new life By dropping this vile cigarette.
andrew149
Nice write Free, like Gashly I have been giving up for over a year, maybe I'll get there one day......Good luck....Andrew.cool
agoodguy2have
Free, another great write on a topic close to all. IMHO, the 4th stanza is GREAT! go on man...stub 'em out! ;-)
Ladybee42
'Her wishes I do so respect' really hope you are doing this for yourself FAL as that's the only way it will work! good luck with all of it...handshake
freeatlast64847
Thanks Mike and congrats! Hopin to meet ya on the other side...
gnj4u
Hi, freeatlast64847,
Overall results will be gainful, Of taking my habits in hand. Most definitely!!! Here's to your success!
freeatlast64847
Thanks caroljoyce! Not to mention my liver and lungs... grin

Thanks jeddah! I'm on my way!
freeatlast64847
Thanks jeddah! Had one glass of wine night before last, none since. Am just taking 3 - 4 drags of a cigarette when I can't stand not to, so this pack has lasted 2 days and counting...
freeatlast64847
Thanks niah, that's how I'm taking it, one day at a time...
freeatlast64847
Good luck marikia! Hope we're both successful!
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