how happy I will be if I can go there how happy I will be if I see you here how happy I will be if I can stay with you now how happy I will be if you smile at me how happy I will be if I can embrace your love how happy I will be if you were here tell me..... how can I describe how much love you I don't know what I am doing here. tell me..... how happy I will be if I am holding your hands tell me..... how can I make you happy tell me..... tell me.....
Thank you very much Mr Ben. there is a big diffrent way to compose japanease poem and western poem. I will trying to learn western poem here. appreciate your encouragement.
agreed...it's a longing poem of love. keep em coming. ;-)
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 22, 2010
Dear Mr.agoodguy2have, Thank you very much sir. I will keep learning and improve english on this site. Have A great evening.
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 22, 2010
thats a nice poem of love sis,keep writting,,
stillframeoklahoma city, Oklahoma USANov 22, 2010
it is nice my poems use to be this good people use to love reading them
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 22, 2010
sis Jedd,Thank you very much for your supporting. I am very suprized how great people here. will catch up. Have A niceday/evening.
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 22, 2010
Dear Gashly,Thank you for coming and nice to meet you. western poetry speaks volumes for your emotions.... I see. appreciate your encouragement. Have A great day.
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 22, 2010
oh,john thank you very much. I just starting to learn western poetry,and improve english here.
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKNov 22, 2010
Ahhhhhh!
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 22, 2010
2kteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee I whispering to your ears again. thank you for coming. glad you being here,there,here..... see you around.
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 22, 2010
Dear caroljoyce, Thank you for coming and nice to meet you. I just start learning western poem. Have A gerat day.
Long Distance love is often the best and truest...If it survives it creates a very strong bond. Nicely exspressed.
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanNov 23, 2010
Dear boyshchrm6, Thank you for coming and nice to meet you. Long Distance love is often the best and truest...and a very strong bond yes,I think so too. I don't have experience long distance love...yet.. imagine and express how missing someone special.. you know like thinking honey everyday,everymoment,noone else but you....only you.... Thank you again.
pinkcoralOPNaha, Okinawa JapanDec 2, 2010
Hi,Ladybee42. I am so glad you liked it. Have A wonderful day.
Comments (15)
there is a big diffrent way to compose japanease poem and western poem.
I will trying to learn western poem here.
appreciate your encouragement.
Thank you very much sir.
I will keep learning and improve english on this site.
Have A great evening.
I am very suprized how great people here. will catch up.
Have A niceday/evening.
western poetry speaks volumes for your emotions....
I see.
appreciate your encouragement.
Have A great day.
I just starting to learn western poetry,and improve english here.
I whispering to your ears again.
thank you for coming.
glad you being here,there,here.....
see you around.
Thank you for coming and nice to meet you.
I just start learning western poem.
Have A gerat day.
and truest...If it survives it creates
a very strong bond. Nicely exspressed.
Thank you for coming and nice to meet you.
Long Distance love is often the best
and truest...and a very strong bond
yes,I think so too.
I don't have experience long distance love...yet..
imagine and express how missing someone special..
you know like thinking honey everyday,everymoment,noone else but you....only you....
Thank you again.
I am so glad you liked it.
Have A wonderful day.