We wrote our life before we were born If indeed it's so, we'd think we'd know Deja vu is claimed to be in that write Feeling of being again in the place that we are.
If it's been once it's been a hundred times That feeling of being of from once before If you've felt it it's seconds of brain freeze on high You can't make that feeling come as you want
A few minutes later you go back to that place In the mind you can think it, but the feelings are gone Try to recount those times that you've been Your memory keeps away those Deja vu times.
Hi Bentlee, these are my beliefs, my feelings about reincarnation. Thank you, well written.
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 23, 2010
reincarnation was it,,excellent poem bentlee and well written as always
GashlyAmish Hell, Ohio USANov 23, 2010
i'm not so sure we wrote our lives...but written they are. and the deja vu moments are kept to a minimum, thakfully. seconds of brain freeze on high...that line is awesome. a fine write to ponder, bentlee, thanks.
Some believe in re-incarnation some don't. So many ways to believe it can be thoughtless for many. I believe our life is written but by whom.......perhaps we'll find out at some point. Ty Luvu for commenting
Gnj, cool comment with wit, Good for you and as we all shall continue to edit our written future....in hopes of good result that sits well in our heart.
RedexNorthumberland, England UKNov 28, 2010
Ah Bentlee life would not be worth living out if it has been written, for me at least I like to feel I am a free spirit, so I like the editing bit, great read, maybe we just pick up vibes of other people just floating around, sorry that was an after thought your poem provokes.
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Thank you, well written.
I don't know who wrote it, but I am still editing! If I didn't say it earlier (deja vu), I'll say it now...I enjoyed the read.