Permissum nos ostendo vos videlicet niveus lux lucis Suo nos ut capimus ut fuga Per pacis quod diligo in a niveus niveus dove Mos ostendo vos via ut Olympus supremus.
With time and the light And the hope that they might See the sight and the vision so clear In my hand and my kind If you take you may find There is no more to say or to hear
Let us show you the clear white light Join us as we take to flight With peace and love on a white white dove Will show you the way to heaven above.
Do you believe The clear white light Is going to guide us on
Bernician, very lyrical lines. since latin is not my 2nd language, i prefer the 3rd stanza, but actually like the cadence and lyrical quality of stanza #2. nice job! ;-)
niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 26, 2010
Hi....Like a poem I used for my finals, this moved me...I'm hoping to get permission to post that poem here, writtien by a wellknown Maori poet....but this is just as magical.... Thank you for posting ...we all need variety....Niah
niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 26, 2010
seems I've forgotten how to write written.... just in a rush...must get to the library...
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Thank you for posting ...we all need variety....Niah