Filo Filo’s Miracle at Sea

After five weeks sought, still missing
from a two-day island jaunt gone awry
with only coconuts and adventure
hidden under the folded tarpaulin
packed in drifting boat, to survive,
hope drowned with the three youth
and their memorial services dotted
the island with grief of families’ loss
sinking into deep sorrow of this truth.

A large number to lose
even if one were not your son,
three out of 500 hundred, missing
while rainwater fell gently then
torrentially, heaven-sent
collected, consumed to quench
thirst for life of each young lad
wanting to mature in years
depending on coconut, raw fish,
lone seagull to sacrifice all they had.

Filo Filo, one of a youthful trio,
with only twelve feet of aluminum
separating them from a similar fate,
adrift for long, sunburned, salty days
in the sea’s wilderness 800 miles
from destination, found
dehydrated but giving thanks
for their miraculous salvation
by San Nikuna, on shortened
return, New Zealand-bound.

While the tuna boat's crew
small portions of fruit and fluids
did to the boys hunger provide,
the atoll of Atafu of the Tokelau
island group, many a mile an’
custom away from our tradition,
celebrated its day of Thanks
Giving, South Pacific style –
not a single day too soon
fifty days since embarkation.
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Posted: Nov 2010

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Comments (9)

agoodguy2have
GNJ, What a great write and a great story of these boys trials and redemption. I read your poem, like a news article, only your's was more eloquent. ;-) Thank you!
Earlgreytea
[hope drowned with the three youth] = unusual imagery..., nice,
i concur with Goodguy, is this a true story?
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have and Earlgreytea,
Thank you for reading my poem. I was captured by the musical sound of Filo Filo's name and the rescue of him, along with Samuel Pelesa and Edward Nasau, who were lost at sea from October 5 to November 25 (the day before our Thanksgiving Day). I was so moved by the miraculous rescue, thinking about my own son and how I would feel. Although true, I had hoped to convey not news but rather feelings of Thanks Giving and hopefulness born in this miraculous survival and recovery.
Ladybee42
great narrative gnj4u, i live near a fishing harbour where as you say one life is very valuable and it's very tragic when one is lost. thumbs up bouquet bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, Ladybee42,
Thank you for your comment. I am pleased that you enjoyed my narrative poem. It's nice when a story has a happy ending!
freeatlast64847
What a great story and well told! Uplifting and inspirational! wine
ReaderOfSouls
Wonderful story and so uplifting! wine thumbs up heart wings
jeddah12
what a superb and inspirational poem gnj4u,,kudoswine bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, freeatlast64847, ReaderOfSouls, Jeddah12 and sophiasummer,
Thank you for finding inspiration in my poem. Looking for hope wherever I can find it, my spirits were so uplifted by the event. Sharing a poem is much like sharing a photograph taken. One hopes that which is felt in the seeing can be seen/felt by another. And, sophiasummer, your comment that your Pacific Island friends would hold my write deeply dear to their hearts touches my heart. Thanks for the love.
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