Haiku Taken Flight

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Nov 2010 712 Views 15 comments

~Haiku~ Taken Flight

Author: Bentlee

Prevailing and Trade Winds blow
Ever engulfing above and below hemisphere split
Amidst mercury now in reform

~Bentlee~

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Posted: Nov 2010

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Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USANov 28, 2010

'where are we?' we're north...eh south...eh north..sorry south!

nice write bentlee

agoodguy2havesuffolk, Virginia USANov 28, 2010

Bentlee, nice 5,7,5 word expressions of seasonal winds and temperatures. ;-)

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USANov 28, 2010

Hi, Bentlee,
Although in Boston, at 27 degrees F currently, it feels more like "regression", I love the imagery of Amidst mercury now in reform.

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 28, 2010

too funny Ladybee, a we tad confused are we lol. Cheers ty for commenting.

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKNov 28, 2010

Nice one bentlee....thankyou.....Andrew

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 28, 2010

Thanks Goodguy I'm Glad you enjoyed

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 28, 2010

Hi Gnj, Boston you say....hows the clam chowder there, I hear it's wonderful lol even at 27 degrees f lol. Ty for commenting

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 28, 2010

ty my friend, good to see you Andrew, I'm hoping you'll post some of your past work in the future.

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 28, 2010

lol Ladybee, yeah I've heard in the southern hemisphere the water swirls the other direction lol. Maybe one day I'll get over the line eh lol

ReaderOfSoulsunknown, Texas USANov 28, 2010

Beautiful words, Bentlee.

It reminds me of Chinook winds.

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaNov 28, 2010

Thank you Readerofsouls, very kind words you've offered here,

niah9Auckland, New ZealandNov 29, 2010

Oh Bentlee...Trade Winds,,,so provocative...wonderfully brief but thought provoking....
At school when a small boy emigrated to Australia...he had a task when crossing the equator. Which way the water swirled before, after...and right on...I now have visions of a small boy named David running up and down a line of handbasins laughing...
Niah