Well Free.....anyone who puts material things ahead of sincere love....need their head examined....I bet their heart isn't beating with tiny threads of pure gold... it's machanical... Any man who dedicates mind-soul-body...to me..... How could a mere female deny him.....
jump aboard my space ship.. Niah
paloma66Manukau, Auckland New ZealandNov 28, 2010
Free as usual,frank,down-to-earth,when all else dies,Free only Love lasts,true love.You are one Great human if you can offer this.All the best Free,God bless you.
In the long run, fortunes may come and fortunes may go. It's the love that you have for each other that will get you through the lean times and the mean times.
Truly honest and from the heart!
caroljoyceManchester, Greater Manchester, England UKNov 28, 2010
It's s very sweet poem, Free.Best offer a girl could ever have, I would say. CJ
Ahh, niah... You always have something insightful to say. The mechanical heart comment reminded me of Tic-Toc from the Oz stories. Would that I could jump aboard your tiny cartoon spaceship and wing around the world at light speed... (non-mechanical)
Such gentle and heartfelt meaning to the words. A greater gift of but oneself cannot be given.
Swan87Syria, QatarNov 29, 2010
Glad To See the Real You !! I love it Take Care Swan
pilgrimageofloveSydney, New South Wales AustraliaNov 29, 2010
The ladies will line up nice poem
jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeNov 29, 2010
a good and real man to offer a real and pure love indeed,,a man like you will be treasured and truly loved by your partner forever...good words that can capture the heart of a real woman..wonderful write fal,,the best of luck
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it's machanical...
Any man who dedicates mind-soul-body...to me.....
How could a mere female deny him.....
jump aboard my space ship..
Niah
In the long run, fortunes may come and fortunes may go. It's the love that you have for each other that will get you through the lean times and the mean times.
Truly honest and from the heart!
CJ
(non-mechanical)
Such gentle and heartfelt meaning to the words. A greater gift of but oneself cannot be given.
Glad To See the Real You !! I love it
Take Care
Swan
nice poem
And no it can't be bought or sold.
So then for some it has no value,
Because it has no worth in gold.
Only things I have to offer,
Are just my heart that's pure and true,
And a mind and soul and body,
That I will dedicate to you..."
Nice job free!
All you have is Everything, and that is nothing less than beautiful ~