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When the clocks stop

I had a light in my hands
The way was bright and secure
It was an illusion, or a nightmare?
As the time runnes in seconds, minutes and days
I get more and more lost.

Time is running behind me
As all the old clocks had stopped
In that moment of truth, of your last word
One second I felt lost.

I'm going down, more down
I'm falling in to the center of my soul
As I'll become a point, a light
Where from I'll be reborn.
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Posted: Dec 2010
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Sometimes we feel that the clocks just stop and nothing has sense..
Somebody I've lost..and will never retourn...

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WillyJustin
i like this one cheers
keesy45
Thank you Justin..hug
pilgrimageoflove
"I'm falling in to the center of my soul
As I'll become a point, a light
Where from I'll be reborn"

beautiful keesy
keesy45
Thank you Pilgrim ..the light is within us..when we feel down it is what saves us..heart beating
agoodguy2have
keesy45, great write of ending and rebirth...kinda Buddhist kind if slant to the whole i think. nice read. ;-0
agoodguy2have
keesy45, great write of ending and rebirth...kinda Buddhist kind if slant to the whole i think. nice read. ;-0
Ladybee42
very deep thoughts keesy, it did feel like going back into the beginning...shrinking. thumbs up thumbs up bouquet bouquet
keesy45
Thank you goodguy..it is a kind of phylosophy here..and yes I've read a lot of buddhism, tao and other great wisdom..

The poin is that to fall in to our soul, it is an issue for the moments we feel the pain and not when we are happy, the salvation is there, we have to be able to find it..

hug
keesy45
Thanks ladybee..retourn to the origins..the time when our Lord gave us the light..a new beginning..hug
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