The World had Bled

A part of me is always a part of you
But I have no ability to begin anew
I have bled my heart beyond repair
We have taken your body and left despair

The rolling thunder plagues my soul
Is it mad desire to bequeath a dust bowl?
I breathe within you and see with knowing eyes
What we have taken comes in false disguise

For we would breathe as seeming one
Forever taking, you would strive to render undone
I would gather your richness within my hand
That slipped through fingers as grains of sand

Your winds of defiance to us tried to speak
We took your beauty and made it ever bleak
As oceans stagnate and green forests fall
It is no passing phase as a nighttimes squall

The arctic winds no longer breathe an icy chill
Mankind will eventually swallow a bitter pill
Within our nature to do too little to late
We tear out your heart and serve it on our plate

You give us life; we bring you your death
Let us both enjoy our last single breath
Like I, a heart laid open emotionally bare
The world had bled, with thoughtless care
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Posted: Dec 2010
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niah9
Yes trurorob....we are all to blame for the destruction of beauty...powerful spiritual write...glad you are back...you was missed...Niahcool teddybear sheep
niah9
Yes trurorob....we are all to blame for the destruction of beauty...powerful spiritual write...glad you are back...you was missed...Niahcool teddybear sheep
niah9
Yes trurorob....we are all to blame for the destruction of beauty...powerful spiritual write...glad you are back...you was missed...Niahcool teddybear sheep
niah9
Yes trurorob....we are all to blame for the destruction of beauty...powerful spiritual write...glad you are back...you was missed...Niahcool teddybear sheep
niah9
sorry folks..it wouldn't load...then whoosh mega commentsrolling on the floor laughing
jeddah12
You give us life; we bring you your death
Let us both enjoy our last single breath
Like I, a heart laid open emotionally bare
The world had bled, with thoughtless care

fantastic write as always sir rob,,very nice too,thanks for sharingcheers
agoodguy2have
rob, i too have missed your words. glad to haaave you back on board captain! bled or not this world of ours is all we've got. ;-)
andrew149
Well written, well said, good one Rob.......Andrewcool
trurorob
Thanks 5 times Niah!
rob
gnj4u
Hi, trurorob,
I breathe within you and see with knowing eyes What we have taken comes in false disguise... Although the beauty of the earth is finite, coming to an end with the death of the sun, with our insatiable appetites to consume, we hasten our own, if not its, end. Nicely penned.
caroljoyce
Thought you were talking about some female for a mo, Rob.
We have made a pigs ear of her, that is for sure.
Thoughtful, well rhymed piece.
Nice to hear your words again,
cj
trurorob
Thanks Jeddah, be cool!!
Rob
purpledragonfly
Very true words written here Rob. Nice one. All the best.applause
Ladybee42
poor earth, but is it tougher than we think?
i hope so...
really enjoyable poem rob, thumbs up bouquet bouquet
Earlgreytea
Classic Trurob, you write with such panache, thanks for sharing dear friend...
trurorob
Thanks Dave!
rob
marikia
Sounds in harmony with Mike's "My Own Little World" with the same deep concern and sympathy for the Earth and its fate. The very first line of the poem: "A part of me is always a part of you" suggests that we should all think of our planet as a miraculous gift bestowed upon us, for us to appreciate and take care of. Thanks, Trurorob, for raising this painful issue.
Fellsman
This is really good............ The following line really grabbed my attention - "We have taken your body and left despair"

I rather think that most poetic people really care about the environment, which is no great surprise as I suspect nature is a fount of inspiration for nearly everybody who writes poetry.

Best wishes

Fellsman
trurorob
Thanks Andrew
rob
jazzy75
Nicely done Rob! A world within a world...eh :) We are hurting ourselves indeed.conversing
trurorob
Thank you Joy
rob
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Thanks CJ
rob
trurorob
Thanks PDF!
rob
boyshchrm6
Great poem. Great write as always Rob. I admire your
concern and anguish with what we are doing to this
planet. It seems our politicians are short sighted
and unconcerned...for the most part. There are those
that strive for the ecology and I applaud them.angel applause doh frustrated cheers peace
trurorob
Thanks Bee
rob
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Thanks Earl
rob
Redex
I hope this poem will not ring true in years to comehandshake
trurorob
Thank you Marikia
rob
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Thank you Fellsman
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Thanks Jazzy
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Thanks Larry
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Thanks Redex
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sophiasummer
Perfect
lindsyjonesonline today!
Intriguing.

Yes, we all have concerns.
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