Forgiveness

There was a time we loved each other
A rain with kisses, smileys, hugs
There was before we've checked our eyes
But then the clouds, the rain and storm.

You've had your words that meant to hurt me
I had bad words into replay
The pain, the the questions all missunderstandings
We've let them play their game.

I know for sure you're not happy
Please let's forget the storm, the rain
From all my heart I will forgive you
Forgive me if you can..I BEG.
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Posted: Dec 2010
About this poem:
THis short poem It is written for a dear friend ..I hope he will read it and forgive me for what I did...

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mike7375
I think if he reads it then it will help him to forgive. It takes two people and you have started with this poem. Good luck Keesy hug
keesy45
Thank you MIke..I hope..innocent
pilgrimageoflove
we are all good
we are all bad
when you forgive
you are forgiven
gnj4u
Hi, keesy45,
There was before we've checked our eyes is such a compelling image. If only games were played so that everyone wins something. Forgiveness begins within and spreads. May it reach its destinations.
agoodguy2have
keesy45, last line sums it up nicely...you can and did! ;-)
keesy45
Thank you Pilgrim..indeed, we are all good we are all bad..

Just our Lord will judge in retourn..hug
keesy45
Thank you gnj4u..it was an online dating..so before was everything good..hug
keesy45
Thank you agoodguy, the last line is the motto..and I stuffed it up around...hug
ReaderOfSouls
A true friend always forgives. :) Great write! thumbs up wine heart wings
niah9
He may still hurt keesy, but he will check the PC out I'm sure, and fingers crossed, he'll make the next step....towards you...be patient. Niahcomfort hug teddybear
keesy45
Thank you Readers..it came out from my soul..hug
keesy45
Niah..I think he already checked..grin thanks!hug
Fellsman
Written right from the heart Keesy. As I've grown older, there is one thing I have found out for sure - Angst and heartache is not the province of only the young, as people sometimes think.

People of all ages can still suffer rejection, emotional highs and lows and all the other impedimenta which comes with relationships.

When cupid fires that arrow - age is no shield against the barbs which can ensue. In any event, this was so well constructed, anybody reading this is bound to hope that things eventually result in a good outcome for you.

Kindest regards

Fellsman
keesy45
Fellsman, you have a good point..thank you for your comment hug
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