There was a time we loved each other A rain with kisses, smileys, hugs There was before we've checked our eyes But then the clouds, the rain and storm.
You've had your words that meant to hurt me I had bad words into replay The pain, the the questions all missunderstandings We've let them play their game.
I know for sure you're not happy Please let's forget the storm, the rain From all my heart I will forgive you Forgive me if you can..I BEG.
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Posted: Dec 2010
About this poem:
THis short poem It is written for a dear friend ..I hope he will read it and forgive me for what I did...
Hi, keesy45, There was before we've checked our eyes is such a compelling image. If only games were played so that everyone wins something. Forgiveness begins within and spreads. May it reach its destinations.
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKDec 9, 2010
Written right from the heart Keesy. As I've grown older, there is one thing I have found out for sure - Angst and heartache is not the province of only the young, as people sometimes think.
People of all ages can still suffer rejection, emotional highs and lows and all the other impedimenta which comes with relationships.
When cupid fires that arrow - age is no shield against the barbs which can ensue. In any event, this was so well constructed, anybody reading this is bound to hope that things eventually result in a good outcome for you.
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we are all bad
when you forgive
you are forgiven
There was before we've checked our eyes is such a compelling image. If only games were played so that everyone wins something. Forgiveness begins within and spreads. May it reach its destinations.
Just our Lord will judge in retourn..
People of all ages can still suffer rejection, emotional highs and lows and all the other impedimenta which comes with relationships.
When cupid fires that arrow - age is no shield against the barbs which can ensue. In any event, this was so well constructed, anybody reading this is bound to hope that things eventually result in a good outcome for you.
Kindest regards
Fellsman