The Second Book Of Job Revisited

Instead of working horseback and following the cow
I could be afoot behind the horse and following the plow.
Sleeping soft in a cabin, cuddling a baby, being a wife,
Clear water, and home cooking, a settled kind of life

That's far away, far, far away from the fix I'm in here now.

Here, my belly is my blanket and my back my only bed,
Stone the only pillow on which to lay my bloody head;
Can't even wallow a hip hole where I lie on solid rock.
No one to sing a sad song, no prayers, no soothing talk.

I'm so alone, so all alone, it will be a comfort to be dead.

A stumble on the rimrock; horse and me both took a spill
He's down, bad hurt and thrashing, beyond my reach to kill
To relieve his pain and misery, so I guess we share our fate
In this lonely place so far away where help will come too late.

And the relief that is my rifle is gone, long gone downhill.

Death won't be long in coming and I hope I face it brave;
That the pain will treat me gentle so I'll not rant and rave,
Cursing the God who made me, or blaming him for this fix
Let me mind, instead stay clear and resist those devil tricks.

And to the end, the very end, thank God for the life HE gave.

As clear and compelling as the clang of a dinner bell
Is the horse's futile scratching at the ground on which he fell,
So the buzzards glide and slide down a drain of azure sky
Studying the menu; watching, waiting for supper to die.

And bones, lonely bones, will be left, the story to tell.

Soon my Maker will be asking if I lived the golden rule
And wonder about my learning in HIS earthly mortal school.
I'll answer for every wicked thought that ever filled my mind
While hoping they'll be balanced by the times I acted kind

So the tally shows not evil, rather, fool' mere human fool.
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Posted: Dec 2010
About this poem:
An accident on the rimrock.

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Ladybee42
now that's a heap of trouble to be in ROS, hope this never happens for real. hug very good poem. thumbs up thumbs up bouquet bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, ReaderOfSouls,
So often in life we find ourselves caught between the rock and a hard place and your description of Can't even wallow a hip hole is so apt. Although death claimed the faithful steed, I am grateful that we were left with a poet and not merely And bones, lonely bones, will be left, the story to tell. What a tale to tell!
ReaderOfSouls
gnj4u,

Thank you for your kind words. hug Sometimes life finds us in a bad situation and we quickly learn to adapt to them in order to survive. This experience is not one that I'd like to re-live again at any time in this life and most certainly not in the next one either. It taught me to really count my blessings and to always keep my wits about me. tip hat May none of you ever find yourself in a similar fix. :)
Calliopesgirlonline today!
I was riding my horse Calliope thru the woods near the river and when we turned out of the woods we would run thru the sandy part of the large trail on the outside. Around and around we would go-then the last turn to run, I had a funny feeling as I looked down at a bush and the bush shook a little and my bad feeling increased. Calliope took off at a gallop and then all of a sudden her head was down and she was bucking hard;I thought I never get thrown and I squeezed my legs with all my strength then all of a sudden I was launched into the air and I was flying at a very high rate of speed. I thought,"Oh God, I am going to die..." and fear went into the depth of me as I was upside down and could see the sun shining on the trees and everything was in slow motion. Then a peace overtook me as I realized that I had no control over this situation. THen I thought," Oh Lord, don't let my husband raise my children, he doesn't love them enough!" I said to the Lord," If you do not kill me this instant- I will serve you all my days!" I hit the ground and the screams came from the very depth of me-my bones were broken and I lay on the ground. I was alive! But, great pain racked my body. ANnd now I serve my Lord, All of my days.
Fellsman
A great, great story - I'm glad Calliopegirl resurrected this poem, which I somehow missed first time around - though the speed at which this board moves at times, there's always going to be the occasional poem which we never even see.

A terrific tale, and I'm so glad that you have had a favourable outcome. I guess the Almighty needed the horse more than you on this occasion.

Very best wishes

Bill teddybear
Fellsman
Hi Calliopegirl

I have just read your response in full: I am so glad that you too survived your brush with death. That is another great story.

Kindest regards

Bill teddybear
ReaderOfSouls
As riders of creatures much larger than ourselves, we take a risk. In doing so, we can be hurt or killed. We're lucky though, we've survived. :) I'm sure God has put the horse to good use and his soul is in good hands now. :)
Earlgreytea
What an incredible write, thanks dear friend, it tugged at my heart...
Earlgreytea
Wow, so this happened to you! It looks like you're a stronger individual for the experience...
ReaderOfSouls
It's one of several experiences/injuries that have shaped my life, EGT. Glad you liked this piece. :) wine
ReaderOfSouls
Remembering this experience...
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