jeddah12singapore, Central Singapore SingaporeDec 10, 2010
impressive write and well said,sir..
FellsmanLake District, Cumbria, England UKDec 10, 2010
Hi Gardenshackle
A salutory tale told in very good rhyme. This poem, as well as being a cautionary tale, scans very well.
A good write.............
Fellsman
EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusDec 10, 2010
Loved it, deep and powerful imagery...
beautifulyouNew York, USADec 10, 2010
I agree, deep and powerful imagery.
Ty for your offering GH
niah9Auckland, New ZealandDec 10, 2010
It actually fits someone I know...very wealthy...always broadcasted the good deed...hurting those on the reciveing end, and as money began to pile high, it was still a rule to work towards retirement...Every day visitos call in old age, they deliver vegies and meat daily ... the special service affordable...but no one else goes near... Good write GH, but also very sad.....
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A salutory tale told in very good rhyme. This poem, as well as being a cautionary tale, scans very well.
A good write.............
Fellsman
Ty for your offering GH
Good write GH, but also very sad.....