You Know

So do you know this from the start
That this one will take care of your heart
Will love you when your down and out
And even love you if you pout

Will stick with you through thick and thin
And when it’s rough they’ll still hang in
And as the years do pass you by
They’ll still be there when you cry

It’s hard these days to find this one
Who’ll stand by you til it’s all done.
And when your old and not a charm
They’ll keep your Heart from any harm

They’ll reassure you all is well
And always say your really swell
And dear you know that this is true
You are the one through and through
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Posted: Dec 2010

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arkansgal
This is what everyone dreams of having,true caring and love for each other
Fellsman
Hi TMIT

A fine poem. I hope you don't mind me making a small observation. Being a bit of a traditionalist, I thought the first stanza was first class and you were using the word "You".

I simply think that reverting to "u" in subsequent stanzas rather than "you" just slightly detracted from an otherwise first rate write.

But who the Hell am I to offer an opinion, being in my 60's I just think that using so-called <msgtxt> in poetry never looks quite right. Maybe I should get a life............

Regards

Fellsman
thismomentintime
Thank you on the observation of the U's instead of the you, when I write these down out of thought I use shorthand so to speak and did not check and correct them to be you instead of U's...I will definitley correct it in my book though..

Thanks again
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