Clouds Of Life

Come sit by me, down on this log;
Now look out over the plains,
To where I'm pointing at right now,
And watch the falling rain.

It's odd the way some clouds can do;
They come and go alone,
To where it's dry as powder hyar,
But pounding down below.

Now take that big one over there
So white and marvelous
You think it'd be the one to watch;
The one to bother us.

But it's not full up to the brim
With water from afar
Like the flat and sullen dark ones
(Like tipping up a jar).

And too, those little ones up there
Close by the mountain peak
They just like to ride the wind
They're so dry they 'near about squeak.

But down there near the winter pass
Where the grass is green and tall
Is where the clouds all come to meet
Where we get the heavy fall.

Can you see out there beyond the clouds?
Where the sky is blue and fair?
To where the sunlight seems to spill
Around most everywhere?

Well, that's the way I feel about you,
Whenever I hear your name,
Because you are like that sky to me,
Some ways, you're near the same.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Dec 2010
About this poem:
The clouds of life can reflect our feelings for someone too.

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jeddah12
Well, that's the way I feel about you,
Whenever I hear your name,
Because you are like that sky to me,
Some ways, you're near the same


very nice and romantic you R.O.S.grin bouquet wine
ReaderOfSouls
Thank you, jeddah. I'm so glad you like it. hug heart wings bouquet
niah9
Lovely sentiment..wonderful comparision...Niahcheering angel
paloma66
Nice way of Romancing with the clouds.Lovely!angel comfort bouquet
ReaderOfSouls
Thank you ladies! hug Clouds also seem to be nature's way of mirroring our emotions- bright and fluffy in an azure sky for happiness. To dark and foreboding when our emotions are off kilter. And sometimes, they just mirror a calmness. :) wine heart wings
ReaderOfSouls
Thank you ladies! hug Clouds also seem to be nature's way of mirroring our emotions- bright and fluffy in an azure sky for happiness. To dark and foreboding when our emotions are off kilter. And sometimes, they just mirror a calmness. :) wine heart wings
Macduff5
Jings! I'm thinking of all those Western movies I've watched in cinemascope. Nice word pictures RoS. thumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, ReaderOfSouls,
I responded to this beautiful write as parent-to-child speaking. Whether it is parent speaking to child or lover to lover, it speaks volumes about love and life.
Ladybee42
cloud watching in poetry, a lovely study of fluffiness! laugh
but you missed one type hun..happy place
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ReaderOfSouls
laugh Unfortunately, I've yet to see a cloud with the number 9 on it. laugh I have felt that way though. thumbs up hug heart wings
Fellsman
Ah! ROS

A meteorological lesson and a declaration of love all in the same poem: Superb.........

Fellsman rose
walkerman
hi ROS..
Nicely worded poetry written in a spirit of freedom..well ROS the cloud9 is right there in your heart..may be you have'nt seen it..goodluck
teddybear
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