Taking Back

I glimpsed inside the casket of black
What took me there then took me back
To times not lost, merely hidden in sorrow
My plea for life to once more steal or borrow

To turn back time and halt the clock
To rid the reaper of that foul gloating mock
In my despair I begged you to arise awake
Searching for movement not mine to take

With feet as lead that now lined your tomb
Once more I pleaded for the sanctuary of your womb
Those gentle hands that had caressed my face
Lay cold and motionless under white lace

I see no chariots on that darkened path
Only my black anger covered with misted wrath
Through tears that tasted so acrid and bitter
All was gone scattered like wasted litter

For where you go it is not my time to tread
You wait for me as I no longer hold dread
But as an empty shell I now have to walk alone
As a broken King who has lost he’s throne

I closed my ears to the toll of the final bell
I wish to ride with you again on the carousel
For in my desolation there will be no other
Take me back and with you my loving mother
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Posted: Dec 2010
About this poem:
ah well, shit happens!

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caroljoyce
It certainly does.
Strong, dark write.crying comfort
cj
niah9
Such an emotional journey Rob...one can sense your pain....angel teddybear Niah
Macduff5
A very powerful poem mate written with your usual economy of words. comfort cheers
agoodguy2have
rob, though she is not back...you definitely are. sorrowful, endearing, loving...yup it happens. ;-]
agoodguy2have
rob, though she is not back...you definitely are. sorrowful, endearing, loving...yup it happens. ;-]
ReaderOfSouls
Life and death.. happens indeed. I felt the same way when my grandmother died. Trying to will her to live once more. I was like a zombie for a year then life just kicked back into gear. My deepest condolences on your loss. comfort

Great write! thumbs up wine
Earlgreytea
Rob, you're a brilliant poet, really, you're one of a kind, friend, thanks for sharing your talent with us, I loved the rugged language used to describe an incredible loss, without measure...
Gwynevier
Perfect!
I wanted to write just Perfect but ...not enough characters! lol
You are a wonderful poet!
gnj4u
Hi, trurorob,
A mother can only hope that her child holds her in high and loving regard. Such a moving tribute, your poem does her life and love a great honor. times not lost, merely hidden in sorrow will endure to bring comfort in the midst of loss now so acrid and bitter. In deepest sympathy.
Swan87
Feel What You feeling Rob .. Great Write hug

Swan
pilgrimageoflove
you certainly know how to write a great poem. although sad, it's a brilliant tribute.

It does happen...to all
jazzy75
Rob....brilliant write! The emotions raw and exposed....I'm touchedhug
trurorob
Thanks CJ, it was long ago but one never forgets!
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boyshchrm6
Great tribute Rob. Obviously a wonderful mother.I felt much the
same when my mom passed away...just can't be...but nothing you
can do but remember her well...and that is very apparent. Sorry for your loss Rob.angel thumbs up comfort angel comfort
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Thanks ROS
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Redex
And the heart and soul one often hides beautiful tribute to someone you cared deeply for.
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Thanks Paloma
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Thanks Earl, very kind words
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