I long to know you inside and out,I need to know all of what your about. You tell me this you tell me that,Yet I don't know where your really at. I want in,Why do you keep me out? My days and nights are filled with longing to be held by you,Please tell me what your going to do. will you make me happy so I'm no longer blue,I only want to be with you. you make me feel weak,Oh my I've just reached my peak. Longing for you,This feeling is so true. Not having you makes me feel incomplete,your like no one I'll ever meet. Please tell me that as often as I long for you one day my longing will bring me closer to you.
While reading your poem I asked myself: what if we kept longing and never ceased looking for love, and love will find us of her own accord?! Because, as the poet said, "Love bade me welcome; yet my soul drew back, Guilty of dust and sin. But quick-eyed Love, observing me grow slack Drew nearer to me, sweetly questioning If I lack'd anything." (G. Herbert) Thanks for your beautiful poem.
Hi, brid523, The longing is clearly painted by I long for you. Communication between lovers at best is a beautiful dance where feeling supersedes knowing. Learning the steps along the way can be painful; but, both people must want to learn to dance. Thank you for sharing This feeling is so true.
brid523OPbuffalo, New York USADec 28, 2010
Thank you for your words of knowing gnj4u.
brid523OPbuffalo, New York USADec 28, 2010
Thank you Marika for reminding about (G.Herbert)words.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 6, 2011
Bravo,a well constructed poem,i enjoyed the read,thanks for sharing this Brid523,awesome
justbereallbirmingham, Alabama USASep 6, 2011
I must say that was well put I really enjoyed that because every word u said was real
brid523OPbuffalo, New York USASep 6, 2011
Thanks justbereall happy you got it
Pepi12Broadview Hts., Ohio USADec 15, 2011
Have U ever been so lonely That U felt like U were the Only one in this world? Have U ever wanted 2 play With someone so much U'd take Any one boy or girl? Anna Stesia come 2 me Talk 2 me, ravish me Liberate my mind Tell me what U think of me Praise me, craze me Out this space and time Between white and black, night and day Black night seemed like the only way... So I danced Music late, nothing great No way 2 differentiate I took a chance Gregory looks just like a ghost And then a beautiful girl the most Wets her lips 2 say "We could live 4 a little while If U could just learn 2 smile U and I could fly away, fly away." Anna Stesia come 2 me Talk 2 me, ravish me Liberate my mind Tell me what U think of me Praise me, craze me Out this space and time Maybe, maybe, maybe I could learn 2 love I mean the right way, I mean the only way Perhaps U could show me, baby Anna Stesia come 2 me Talk 2 me, ravish me Liberate my mind Maybe, maybe, maybe I could learn 2 love If I was just closer 2 something Closer 2 your higher self I don't know Closer 2 heaven (Maybe) closer 2 God (closer to God) Save me Jesus, I've been a fool How could I forget that U are the rule U are my God, I am Your child From now on, 4 U I shall be wild I shall be quick I shall be strong I'll tell Your story, no matter how long (no matter how... no matter) We're just a play in Your master plan Now, my Lord I understand (I understand) Love is God, God is love Girls and boys love God above!! (the end)
This is something for u, From me! Written By Prince
brid523OPbuffalo, New York USADec 15, 2011
Prince all I can say is that you WOW me and with every fiber of my being I say THANK YOU.
Comments (13)
"Love bade me welcome; yet my soul drew back,
Guilty of dust and sin.
But quick-eyed Love, observing me grow slack
Drew nearer to me, sweetly questioning
If I lack'd anything." (G. Herbert)
Thanks for your beautiful poem.
Wonderfully written!!
You have the balance of words spot on, and all true....and heartfelt...hope it works out....
Niah
rob
The longing is clearly painted by I long for you. Communication between lovers at best is a beautiful dance where feeling supersedes knowing. Learning the steps along the way can be painful; but, both people must want to learn to dance. Thank you for sharing This feeling is so true.
That U felt like U were the
Only one in this world?
Have U ever wanted 2 play
With someone so much U'd take
Any one boy or girl?
Anna Stesia come 2 me
Talk 2 me, ravish me
Liberate my mind
Tell me what U think of me
Praise me, craze me
Out this space and time
Between white and black, night and day
Black night seemed like the only way...
So I danced
Music late, nothing great
No way 2 differentiate
I took a chance
Gregory looks just like a ghost
And then a beautiful girl the most
Wets her lips 2 say
"We could live 4 a little while
If U could just learn 2 smile
U and I could fly away, fly away."
Anna Stesia come 2 me
Talk 2 me, ravish me
Liberate my mind
Tell me what U think of me
Praise me, craze me
Out this space and time
Maybe, maybe, maybe I could learn 2 love
I mean the right way, I mean the only way
Perhaps U could show me, baby
Anna Stesia come 2 me
Talk 2 me, ravish me
Liberate my mind
Maybe, maybe, maybe I could learn 2 love
If I was just closer 2 something
Closer 2 your higher self
I don't know
Closer 2 heaven (Maybe) closer 2 God (closer to God)
Save me Jesus, I've been a fool
How could I forget that U are the rule
U are my God, I am Your child
From now on, 4 U I shall be wild
I shall be quick I shall be strong
I'll tell Your story, no matter how long (no matter how... no matter)
We're just a play in Your master plan
Now, my Lord I understand
(I understand)
Love is God, God is love
Girls and boys love God above!! (the end)
This is something for u, From me! Written By Prince
YOU.