Oh~O~~~ sounds like love at first sight!.... Wow how was it? When you first met her, did everything around you move so slow or even stop for a sec like in love movies? Did your heart really beat like it could jump out of your chest? And you didn't know what to do or say anythin when she smiled and looked at you? At that moment, you only knew that you could fly to the highest sky if she asked for a star? Did it really happen to you? Really?! Really? Really? .... Wow...

However, if its just a poem not that based on your true story then it is still nice write!! first attraction can lead to love, long relationship and together forever, respectively! I believe. ^_~ / Cheers!

^_~ S & s

cool write cosmos!

hehee Mr. Goodguy, you j-e-a-l-o-u-s Mr. COSMO huh?? I can smell that!!! hahahaa :p kidding .. sorry for teasing you. :P That funny thought was pop up on my mind when I read your msg that said, "all ladies........." thats it! :P

A lil note 2 Mr.GG: I'll tell u a secret, (Tons of ladies also appreciated u!!!!) >_< dont tell any1 that I tell u ok, or i might get kick out?

true and well said,,what a lovely poem,,keep them coming sir.thanks for sharing