freed

by BentleeSmith Falls, Ontario, Canada

Aug 2009 742 Views 9 comments

"freed"

forgiven hearts rise passioned souls sunlit thoughts collective cite graceful walk smiled bright wind's at your back your shadows light aura's round pleasured sound all dark is bright little feared self loves right soul's content-mind thought plight!

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Posted: Aug 2009

About this poem:

inner peace

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amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 22, 2009

Contemplative subject this morning....I wonder how many truly feel their inner peace?

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 22, 2009

Morning Ama, good question, it's certain to never be found in the wrong places:)

amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 22, 2009

Very true...but for some...the wrong place is where they look first...

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 22, 2009

I'm guilty of that, slowly it's being found one peace at a time lol:)

amahlalaAberdeen, South Dakota USAAug 22, 2009

I spent too many years looking in the wrong place

but...live and learn! lol

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKAug 22, 2009

very nice bentlee, read it 2 or 3 times, once i'd worked out where to put the commas in i got it fine, I think the wine helped! nice ploy have to try that one...lol

BentleeOPSmith Falls, Ontario CanadaAug 22, 2009

Lol hi Andrew, i was going to break it up with comma's. Decided not too as is collective thought. An to the reader it's exercise for the mind an with doing it becomes self appointed thought an intrigue:) ty.