DRAGONS BREATH!

These days, I seemed almost always down,
My brow creased with an almost permanent frown,
I had almost given up on my latest story for good,
Wrapped round my warm coat, pulled up the hood,
Headed for the beach,
Maybe, for some inspiration to reach.
The waves were rough, sparse clouds rushing, blowing up a storm,
Wind getting brisker, though it seemed to be pulsating, eerily warm,
I remember feet lazily kicking the sand,
A short distance from the stormy waves crashing on land,
…BANG!
I involuntarily jumped!
…BANG!
Heart thumped….Blood pumped,
My ears rang, my senses surrendered,
Surrounded by the unearthly scream of air being rendered,
Stinging, blinding sand…. Shadows, flying, fleeting,
The sound of…..Flapping….Beating,
An eruption of flame, glowing coal red eye,
Defying the dark cold of the starry night sky.
I was struck dumb, immobile, completely smitten,
For…Exactly as from my imagination I had written,
There…..THERE!…
Sitting on the beast’s back, wand held high in the air,
With starry eyes and floating hair…..
He looked at me….A full on stare,
I gasped!….dreamweaver himself!
He nodded…..A smile crossing his lips, full of care,
Then suddenly, the feeling that the time had come,
To leave this realm and to wakefulness succumb,
Then the mental wrench,
Ozone stench,
My dream,
Does seem,
To die…. A sudden death…
………………..
No… Wait……
The eerily warm pulsating breeze, there, though fading,
A false memory?……..
No…..Realization growing…
A smile….A knowing….
The Remnants of Dragons Breath!
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
AHA!....dreamweaver returns....lol....Andrew...xxx

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Comments (28)

Earlgreytea
Stunning Andrew, it seems i'm not the only one with dragons on my mind this morning, lol...applause
Macduff5
I really like this one Andrew. The need to get inspiration. So hard for the writer. What did Ted Hughes call it..the "Thought Fox"? thumbs up
gnj4u
Hi, andrew149,
To leave this realm and to wakefulness succumb, until next smitten by the dreamweaver and Realization growing… A smile….A knowing….. Your poem breathes life into Poet's Corner with DRAGONS BREATH!
Ladybee42
very cool andrew - this is great, i love the way you write.
Hmmm! what's that rather odd smell? oh someones' socks grin

thumbs up thumbs up bouquet bouquet
andrew149
Thank you Earl Grey, very kind of you. I'm pleased you enjoyed it....Andrewcool
niah9
Ab Fab..Andrew....wonderful read....and my fovourite creatures are dragons......cool Niahteddybear
Fellsman
Hi Andrew

The muse can come in so many forms - Dreamweaver guided your pen with that knowing smile - the result being this great tale...

Regards

Bill
Pinkpoetress
Andrew,
I loved it! Great story. I can't wait to read more.
andrew149
Very true Mac....pleased you liked it...Thankyou....Andrewcool
agoodguy2have
andrew, what does the dragons breath smell like? the poem seems to start on an eerie note then turn comforting. a true story crafter you are! ;-)
jeddah12
a poignant write and always an enjoyable read from you sir..i smile,i imagine a dragon with this,lol,,thanks dearcheers
andrew149
Very pleased you enjoyed it gnj4u, am getting on with the story now...Andrewxxxcool
andrew149
Thankyou very much LB, very kind words....will get a big head soon....lol.....Andrewxxxcool
andrew149
Glad you like dragons Niah....Thankyou....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
thankyou Fellsman, though you were not to know it, dreamweaver is a product of my muse....I like him too.....Andrewcool
andrew149
Thankyou Pink, then, we shall just have to see about that.....Andrew..xxxcool
andrew149
That would be telling GG....lol.....many thanks my friend....Andrew...cool
andrew149
Thanks very much Jeddah, pleased it pleased you....Andrew...xxxcool
trurorob
great, remind me not to come back to Bournemouth again!
rob
boyshchrm6
Great write Andrew. Captures realistic vivid images as if one were there and infuses emotions. Simply Marvelous.applause peace yay cheers
Frenchsilk
A very different and inspiring poem. I love the hiatus of anticiapation that you crafted into this
jazzy75
Ah sweet!!...my hero returns!!....Dreamweaver will visit once more :)
andrew149
Thankyou Soph...very pleased you liked it...Andrew...xxxcool
Redex
Wonderful tale dreamweaver returnscheering
SCatlyn
Love this poem... and what a great imagination(whether asleep or not - lol).
So much fun to read!

P.S.It wasn't really at Bournemouth... or was it?(I might visit there someday - or not!)
andrew149
Thankyou Boychrm...great to see you my friend...sorry for the delay....Andrewcool
windyweatherly
Very great story Andrew, I am pretty sure it wasn;t a dream?
andrew149
hahahaha thanks Rob, I will keep the beer warm for you hey....Andrewcool
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