BEYOND THE EDGE

Dangling by a seeming thin thread,
Past outcrop, looking down,
Five hundred metres down,
Sheer drop, sheer dread,
See the ledge to the left,
Bright sunlight,
Nothing’ but air to the right,
If I can just reach that cleft….
So shift my weight,
To the right, then the left,
Carabiner locked, no energy left,
In the hands of God and fate,
Rope walks on the sharp edge… begins to chafe,
This is it…Last pendulum swing,
Lose or win, swing baby swing,
As the maximum push creeps you out….
Of the safe…..
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Jan 2011
About this poem:
Inspired by a line in bentlee's poem "To Be On The Edge".....Thankyou my friend....Andrew

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stillframe
very dizzying poem good job
niah9
Isn't is amazing where inspirations comes from...wonderful scary poem....Andrew, so different from your norm...Niahdancing grin
Bentlee
Cheer's Andrew, ty for letting that line inspire you my friend. Yeah on the edge.......in your write cheers hug
ReaderOfSouls
I like this a lot!! thumbs up wine Keep pushing for that edge, hon. hug heart wings teddybear
boyshchrm6
Nice write Andrew. Got my adranalin goin
just reading it.head banger help
andrew149
Thanks SF...Glad it had the effect....Andrew...cool
Fellsman
Heck Andrew

You left us all dangling above that drop - suspended by a chafing rope. help Great imagery... a fine write...

Regards

Bill
Macduff5
Cheers Andrew...never done it literally but a good metaphor for the risks we take.
Ladybee42
laugh love this andrew - swing baby swing...

thumbs up bouquet bouquet
andrew149
very true Niah...Bentlee kindly said I could use it, so then I wrote the poem,....dunno just loved the line.....Andrew...cool
andrew149
No problem bentlee, thanks very much for the line....Andrewcool
andrew149
Thankyou RoS....Pleased you liked it....Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
calm down boycharm.....lol...pleased you liked it....Andrewcool
pilgrimageoflove
Andrew

Borderline stuff indeed
thanks
jazzy75
Still swinging....whew!!! what a ride....loved your poem....was on the edge of my seat the whole time!!dancing
andrew149
Thankyou fellsman, pleased you enjoyed the experience....lol....Andrewcool
andrew149
neither have I Mac, don't like heights....lol....thanks....Andrew...cool
andrew149
Thankyou gnj4u....Yep...loads more in this...lol...Andrew...xxxcool
Redex
Don't like hieghts mmmmmm you certainly climbed this one adrenalin flows dizzyteddybear
andrew149
Thanks very much LB...hope all is good your side...Andrew...xxxcool
andrew149
AHA!....Thank you Jaz....didn't realise I hadn't answered some comments....I expect there are a few hey...lol....sorry for the lateness...Glad you liked it...Andrew...xxxcool
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