Hi, serpico12, Though distance and silence find themselves sometimes in the presence of love, it may not always be said that they "make the heart grow fonder". Silent stars out in the sky...Can we learn from them..., the poet asks. To let our lights shine, perhaps.
RedHeadedTaurusHere, Michigan USAJan 23, 2011
I love Nature.
Very nice.
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 23, 2011
hi goodguy, well it could be both..shine in silence in space, or in a person with beauty and a less wordy personality, which can be the same ...thanks..
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 23, 2011
thanks gn for your comments..i was aiming to touch on the power of silence through stars, and that silence is a great arrow to ones quiver..useful trait...appreciate your input...thanks
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 23, 2011
hi redheadedtauras..thanks for your comments..like you i love nature, great scope for poetry..thanks for commenting...
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 24, 2011
Wow... so pretty! Love the theme... and so many descriptive phrases- "...like little lanterns hung in the dark of space", "on a blackened robe she sparkles...", "blue moon kissing, sun light walking", "wind gently caress"... I could go on, but better stop. Every once in a "blue moon" I come across something so calming & enjoyable to read. Really nice!
serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKJan 24, 2011
hey scatlyn, my thank you for so many colorful views of the poem..you are so brilliant in your comments..you make the poem sit up and take notice...thank you dear lady....i appreciate the time and wording..you are ever so kind..
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Though distance and silence find themselves sometimes in the presence of love, it may not always be said that they "make the heart grow fonder". Silent stars out in the sky...Can we learn from them..., the poet asks. To let our lights shine, perhaps.
Very nice.
Every once in a "blue moon" I come across something so calming & enjoyable to read. Really nice!