loves potential

by Unknown

Feb 2011 825 Views 16 comments

loves potential

Author: Unknown

How can you describe love
so many of us try too
is she a hand in glove
or someone ever true

Love is so much more
than one first surmises
when she knocks at your door
expect some suprises

Love real love will give
love real love is strong
she knows how to live
she knows whats wrong

She can be the balm
to heal a wounded soul
tranquil and calm
she will make one whole.

~ ~ ~ ~ ~

Posted: Feb 2011

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SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 3, 2011

She is both, and so much more... and everything you wrote

Just beautiful!

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 3, 2011

hi scatlyn..hey thank you once again for viewing and liking the poems with your thoughtful comments..

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAFeb 10, 2011

It's romantic!!!!

I think all women in the world would love to be the "balm" to heal someone's wounded soul. heeheee (but must be someone we love)

Ps. Serpico, do you love GREEN? I see your 80% poem's theme is Green!! Me too!! Me loves Green very much+++

SaS

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 10, 2011

Hi Sun & Sea! You're very observant - I think you must be right about the green

I seem to recall it in quite a few of Serpico's poems... and I see you added some green as well.

That makes 3 of you that like green - my son's favorite color is green!(and orange-lol)

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAFeb 10, 2011

my fav colors :
#1 = green
#2 = white
#3 = orange(I didnt copy your son, ok!! I always love it lol)
#4 = pink
#5 = brown

PS. I think 90% of serpico's poem are green not ~~80%~~ lol

Nice Color!!

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 10, 2011

I believe you... about the ORANGE (& my son would think that's very cool!!)

And I bet you're right about the 90%... kinda hard to tell for sure, though(he's got 350 poems on here, 346 written since Jul.2010)...

Oh... and my fave(you prob. already saw) is what you just wrote in:
TEAL & 2nd fave is RED

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 10, 2011

P.S.Just noticed BROWN- very unusual for a favorite color, although it's one of my favorite colors to wear

pps - Serpico, every time I make a comment(even if it's off-topic

), I see your poem as I'm typing... and it's beautiful to read every time

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAFeb 10, 2011

Do you think Serpico will get mad with us??

cus we are messing up his poem's comment.

lol >_</// I feel a guilty now.

>_</// I am sorry I am the one that rised the color subject...

BUT THE MAIN REASON IS I LOVED YOUR WRITE SERPICO!!!!

scatlyn, now serpico wont mad me, but you. lol

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 11, 2011

(in case this lands on p.2...) quote from p.1 -
"scatlyn, now serpico wont mad me, but you. lol"

Well, think I took care of it, & I believe he loves GREEN for poems(

and I don't feel guilty) & I do love this poem

(...maybe a lit-tle guilty

)

Once again, Serpico, love ALL your poems very much

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 11, 2011

hi there sunandsea and scatlyn..hey looks like you are both into the color conversation..lol

no sunandsea you didnt mess up the poem, its nice to see you both exchanging your favourite colours, you are right i do like green, but i love blue as my favourite..ocean colour...thats where i go first...green is next..thanks ladies..

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAFeb 11, 2011

SCatlynnnnn))))

Come over here now))) lol are you invisible?? Serpico wont mad us)))))))

SCatlyn Come on here))))

Lets mess up his poem board again... LOLOL

^___^ Thank you Serpico.... I'm sure you know we both Love your writes soo much... and we didnt mean to mess up!!!

just a lil (i-n-t-e-n-t-i-o-n) maybe.. LOL kidding:P

SCatlynnnnnn)))

WE ARE FORGIVEN)))) yaayyyy

lol

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 11, 2011

hi and thanks sunandthesea..i can see you are someone who is a good tease..good sense of fun...and loves to roam in colours..good for you..seems like you and scatlyn have hit it off..thats neat...cheers..

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 11, 2011

hi boyscharm...yes i see what you mean about the colors...thanks for dropping by to view the poem...

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 11, 2011

In response to: Come over here now))) lol are you invisible?? Serpico wont mad us)))))))

Well, I'm often invisible on purpose, but my browser got eaten by a malware bot last night & I had to call tech help to get back online- so finally here... and so glad to find out the good news!!

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAFeb 11, 2011

SCatlyn yeahhh )))

Finally you are visible!! lol Ive tried to msg you about this good news but you were invisible. (scared of Serpico? lol)... hehehe I knew Serpico is kind! @^_^@

another good news is 'WE' have made "boyshchrm" BLIND

! lol

(

see his (boyshchrm) image! He is soo cool to be true! lol

I cant believe this cool guy is still left on earth.. lol >_< / but pity! seems he doesnt like any color.

then Serpico is the best!

(n' this is his place! lol)

serpico12OPcardiff, Mid Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 12, 2011

hi and welcome back to the funny duo..aka scatlyn and sunandthesea..only joking..but you two seem to get on real well...and sunandsea you are quite alert and sharp..aka the notes on poem for myself and boyscharm...

i can see you two could be a handful...

thanks again both of you.

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