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by hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia, USA

Feb 2011 752 Views 11 comments

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Author: hedistuff

oh I wish I were a shoe
so many things that I could do
I could walk, step and skip
I could swallow my tongue
..wear lacy stuff
walk or strut, on a heel
kick stuff
tread on stuff
dance
run
oh my!
I'm exhausted...
oh please...I don't want to be a shoe

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Posted: Feb 2011

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Comments (11)

andrew149

andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKFeb 10, 2011

Oh My Hedi.....Not feeling a little down at heel are we?..lol...Nice one my friend....Andrew...

trurorob

trurorobAlicante, Valencia SpainFeb 10, 2011

unique take, had me smiling!
rob

SCatlyn

SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKFeb 10, 2011

Now do you or don't you?

Loved it!

Earlgreytea

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusFeb 11, 2011

Funny and breezy, pity you had such a poor response..., have we lost our sense of humor?

jazzy75

jazzy75Houston, Texas USAFeb 11, 2011

lol....i just 'love' shoes.....they certainly do get around!

thesunandthesea

thesunandtheseaTampa, Florida USAFeb 18, 2011

lovely cute confusing self poem!

LOL so you wanna be a shoe or not?

LOL I think being a shoe is not as cool as being you! ^_*

swade777

swade777Grants Pass Area, Oregon USAFeb 18, 2011

Personally... I think the thought of having to wear 'lacy stuff' would drive me to becoming a COWBOY BOOT real quick!!

Ride em cowboy!! Great poem hedistuff!!

Happygolucky4u

Happygolucky4uTreasure Coast, Florida USAFeb 19, 2011

If you were a shoe think how cherished you would be. At least I know I cherish my shoes

But tell me if you were a shoe why do shoes like to eat socks

I enjoyed this poem.

woolfwithaview

woolfwithaviewSt John's, Newfoundland CanadaFeb 19, 2011

That's fabulous. I love it. reminds me of Pablo Neruda.

schawalski

schawalskiCork, IrelandFeb 27, 2011

but if you were a shoe hedistuff you could out run the fuzz

boyshchrm6

boyshchrm6barrie, Ontario CanadaFeb 27, 2011

I caught the Freudian slip there Hedistuff.
"wear lacy stuff"..I'd backtrack on that
statement also...lol. Don't be a "heel" Hedi.

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