rainy days

spirit blowed
in intensity
of us
human mind blast
with dejective ..
sound
i'm closed..
in myself
once..again.
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Posted: Feb 2011
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positiveness in..break''

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Ladybee42
you need to do some flying! get some air in your lungs...cool
very cool words superman!

teddybear teddybear
agoodguy2have
super, yeah...i know that feeling, rainy days and mondays...'cept tomorrow, i'm off. ;-)
Chrone
i like rainy days but not metaphoric ones, i read your poems, wonderful work !handshake I hope those sunny days to come back fast for you! thumbs up
superman30
You Lady Teddy..you made my day..look at me... applause
Mr Dave ,how,wha'..'re you off?is this the gift of retirement:)..or..
Your positive feedback,Chrone is much appreciated.
Thank you all for stoping the rain'' thumbs up
simpleME32
i need a rain too..to wake me up from this stare,Super..
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