to decide how things must be or tell you what is best for you, nor clothes of a bystander wear, watching silently while you are threatened or killed.
So, in your life, what role do I play? How does one make a difference but not get in your life’s way? Questions that haunt are deeply instilled.
Searching for answers, pecking the keys to type paved pathways to freedom Doors and hearts opened, fingers squeezed back-spacing over hatred, a better life to build.
With wounds and demons to fight both from within and without, all as our circle closes tightly, under harsh light, ozone comes through holes waiting to be filled.
Though within the spectrum of light lies, within its whiteness, colors, we cannot see those bands of caring that span the skies until by refraction rainbow-beauty is spilled.
While it is not for me to decide or to tell you what is best for you It is for me with you to abide together, by beveled mirror, revealed.
gnj, it's definitely for me, to tell you this is a very good poem, with sage advice, and complex quatrain rhyming. always you dig for the deeper meaning "Searching for answers, pecking the keys"...oh peck on! ;-)
andrew149Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UKMar 1, 2011
Brilliant Gnj4u, an excellent and enjoyable read, thankyou for posting.....Andrew...xxx
You are the Rainbow Gnj4u (And I don't mean Skittles) Great write
Macduff5Newcastle, New South Wales AustraliaMar 2, 2011
What role should you play Gnj? Traditionally poets are sages and I think that you very much in that tradition...so write and speak your mind...you have many listeners out here.
While it is not for me to decide or to tell you what is best for you
Well, this is for me to decide to read and I know it is best for me!!! Though you said, it is not for you to decide what is best for me, but you ALWAYS guide me EXCELLENT ways and write NICE poems!!! And.....thats more than enough... ^______________^
Thank you for writing this!!! ^__^ Wanna HUG you in real!! Now I can do only mutual HUGS! pity!
(((( Squeeezeeee HUGSSSS ))))
RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 2, 2011
gnj4u i read this as what is happening all over the world, it is not up to us to decide how things should be, but sooo hard to watch as a bystander a brilliant write
Hi, agoodguy2have, andrew149, hedistuff, niah9, SUMMIT09, Fellsman, Tithonus, boyshchrm6, Macduff5, thesunandthesea, and Redex, Thank each of you so much! Your kind words are most moving to read; and, our abiding together gives strength and hope. I am honored to be pecking the keys among you. May the world be filled with a "synaesthetic spectrum of peace and care."
Hi, jazzy75, caroljoyce, moonlight31, and Earlgreytea, I value your poetic friendship and feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my post. moonlight31, It is for me to say, HUGs are always welcome!
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An absolute quality write from beginning to end... loved it!
Best wishes
Bill
Great write
or to tell you what is best for you
Well, this is for me to decide to read and I know it is best for me!!! Though you said, it is not for you to decide what is best for me, but you ALWAYS guide me EXCELLENT ways and write NICE poems!!! And.....thats more than enough... ^______________^
Thank you for writing this!!! ^__^ Wanna HUG you in real!! Now I can do only mutual HUGS! pity!
(((( Squeeezeeee HUGSSSS ))))
Thank each of you so much! Your kind words are most moving to read; and, our abiding together gives strength and hope. I am honored to be pecking the keys among you. May the world be filled with a "synaesthetic spectrum of peace and care."
to HUG YOU TIGHT and say WONDERFUL
I value your poetic friendship and feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my post. moonlight31, It is for me to say, HUGs are always welcome!
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly!
On the rooftop or wherever we stand, it should be together, for something. Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem.
Wonderful poem. Intense. Thanks for sharing more of yourself. Blessings.