It’s Not for Me

to decide how things must be
or tell you what is best for you, nor
clothes of a bystander wear, watching silently
while you are threatened or killed.

So, in your life, what role do I play?
How does one make a difference
but not get in your life’s way?
Questions that haunt are deeply instilled.

Searching for answers, pecking the keys
to type paved pathways to freedom
Doors and hearts opened, fingers squeezed
back-spacing over hatred, a better life to build.

With wounds and demons to fight
both from within and without, all
as our circle closes tightly, under harsh light,
ozone comes through holes waiting to be filled.

Though within the spectrum of light lies,
within its whiteness, colors, we cannot see
those bands of caring that span the skies
until by refraction rainbow-beauty is spilled.

While it is not for me to decide
or to tell you what is best for you
It is for me with you to abide
together, by beveled mirror, revealed.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2011

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Comments (23)

agoodguy2have
gnj, it's definitely for me, to tell you this is a very good poem, with sage advice, and complex quatrain rhyming. always you dig for the deeper meaning "Searching for answers, pecking the keys"...oh peck on! ;-)
andrew149
Brilliant Gnj4u, an excellent and enjoyable read, thankyou for posting.....Andrew...xxxcool
hedistuff
nice friend...
niah9
Just had to comment....you are a talented caring lady...Niahgrin bouquet
SUMMIT09
thumbs up teddybear purple heart
Fellsman
Dear Joy

An absolute quality write from beginning to end... loved it!

Best wishes

Bill hug
boyshchrm6
You are the Rainbow Gnj4u (And I don't mean Skittles)
Great write angel thumbs up hug angel
Macduff5
What role should you play Gnj? Traditionally poets are sages and I think that you very much in that tradition...so write and speak your mind...you have many listeners out here.
cheers
thesunandthesea
While it is not for me to decide
or to tell you what is best for you


Well, this is for me to decide to read and I know it is best for me!!! professor Though you said, it is not for you to decide what is best for me, but you ALWAYS guide me EXCELLENT ways and write NICE poems!!! And.....thats more than enough... ^______________^

Thank you for writing this!!! ^__^ Wanna HUG you in real!!blushing Now I can do only mutual HUGS! pity! sad

((((hug Squeeezeeee HUGSSSS hug ))))
Redex
gnj4u i read this as what is happening all over the world, it is not up to us to decide how things should be, but sooo hard to watch as a bystander a brilliant writecomfort
gnj4u
Hi, agoodguy2have, andrew149, hedistuff, niah9, SUMMIT09, Fellsman, Tithonus, boyshchrm6, Macduff5, thesunandthesea, and Redex,
Thank each of you so much! Your kind words are most moving to read; and, our abiding together gives strength and hope. I am honored to be pecking the keys among you. May the world be filled with a "synaesthetic spectrum of peace and care."
jazzy75
With accpetance comes love...the unconditional kind. You've written a brilliant poem my friend and leave me fulfilledhug
caroljoyce
Beautiful and profound. Simply, acceptance is key.
moonlight31
well it is for me to decide
to HUG YOU TIGHT and say WONDERFULhandshake
Earlgreytea
Beautiful, soft, meaningful, mature, thank you...bouquet
gnj4u
Hi, jazzy75, caroljoyce, moonlight31, and Earlgreytea,
I value your poetic friendship and feedback. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my post. moonlight31, It is for me to say, HUGs are always welcome!
Ladybee42
gnj4u this is just lovely,

thumbs up thumbs up teddybear teddybear
gnj4u
Hi, Ladybee42,
Thank you for taking the time to read and comment so kindly!
gvmeu2
upon the rooftop...stand.
gnj4u
Hi, gvmeu2,
On the rooftop or wherever we stand, it should be together, for something. Thank you for taking the time to comment on my poem.
cafetwo2010
gnj.. If your beautiful sensitive poem got any deeper I'd need a lifeguard.bouquet
Pinkpoetress
Joy,
Wonderful poem. Intense. Thanks for sharing more of yourself. Blessings.
nabii
Awesome write, very meaningful
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