I dream of more

by givemeloveBelo Horizonte, Minas Gerais, Brazil

Mar 2011 526 Views 4 comments

"I dream of more..."

My angel´s dirty heart is sore
Like i never saw before
Feeling my inner core...
I won´t be hurt anymore...
I keep my silent sorrows therefore...
Maybe i need to restore my balance if i visit any seashore...
Maybe more...
And even more...

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Posted: Mar 2011

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RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 4, 2011

So sad your dream but do hope for sweeter ones for you

TutelageSTHLM, Stockholm SwedenMar 7, 2011

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Ladybee42East Liverpool, Ohio USAMar 22, 2011

Your opening lines are so cool...

vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaMar 22, 2011

There are feelings in your poem. But, although it is short, there are too many rhymes which have a bit tiresome effect. The rest of it is great! Thanks for sharing.

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