My angel´s dirty heart is sore Like i never saw before Feeling my inner core... I won´t be hurt anymore... I keep my silent sorrows therefore... Maybe i need to restore my balance if i visit any seashore... Maybe more... And even more...
vyoletaArkaroola, South Australia AustraliaMar 22, 2011
There are feelings in your poem. But, although it is short, there are too many rhymes which have a bit tiresome effect. The rest of it is great! Thanks for sharing.
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