Long Gray Day

Assailed by the mist and chill
Day is dawning cool and damp
Coffee warm I drink my fill
As dimness hovers over camp

Another day behind me now
Another day before me still
To slog on upward, aching
On this quest toward the hill

My feet they feel so heavy
But I know I cannot tarry
There's naught to do but climb
For there are things that I must carry.

One day I'll look behind me
As I've cleared the hill ahead
And it will be then worth the cost
But the time till then I dread.

Nothing good is had with ease
This quest is no exception
And I only need to keep my trek
Onward, in the right direction

Long gray day before me
Long gray day behind me
One less than the day before
Till my angel's light shall find me.
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
I wish I could say more but words aren't coming easily for now.

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Comments (8)

andrew149
They will GH, and one day you will note that there are brighter days not far ahead again, rather than behind.....Chin up fella....Andrew
cool
Fellsman
Hi GH

A lover's lament, very sensitively articulated. You at least can console yourself with the thought that you are - in any event - now ticking off the days to your certain reunion.

Fine writing, and best wishes to you both...

Kind regards

Bill wine wine
Happygolucky4u
crying crying I actually think I am hurting for the both of youbouquet
thesunandthesea
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hug teddybear hug
gnj4u
Hi, gardenhackle,
In Till my angel's light shall find me there is love and hope to brighten even the grayest of days! May it continue to be a beacon into future's complete happiness!
Redex
crying I wail for both of youcrying
niah9
Every day endured..is one crossed off on the way to the future....and happiness......Niahcheering comfort hug
caroljoyce
sad flower teddybear comfort
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