You leave a trail of tears where ever you go. Of a love not meant to be. You are closed..... no way in. There will be no changes in how you feel. You say this love is holding you against your will. But it's you that's holding on. With a heart that's turning to stone. I would like to reach and take you out. Show you what true love is all about. But all the signs say closed........and there is no way in. You can't see me through the pain. So I will pass you by. It is such a shame. To watch you miss what was a lie. I could set you free. Show you what you have missed. But that will not be. For I don't want to tread upon the stones. Of what use to be your heart. So I will leave you alone. Maybe one day your living will start. But it want be with me. For I can't drink from a cup. That seems to be empty.
Oh happygolucky that is sometime so true, liked this poem of yours.
niah9Auckland, New ZealandMar 22, 2011
In your own words Happygolucky4u, you have captured something I have felt, but never thought enough for words....a time when you know...but you just don't have the energy to explain or sort it....already too late. Niah...
SCatlynBrecon, South Glamorgan, Wales UKMar 22, 2011
Poignant, sad - but wonderful writing. Such descriptive phrases - "...I don't want to tread upon the stones, of what use to be your heart"...
SCatlyn yes it is sad. Sometimes life can turn ones heart hard. The heart needs healing time. And hopefully it will heal.
Poetnumber1St James, Port of Spain Trinidad and TobagoSep 14, 2011
You speak your heart very passionately in words to which most of us can relate to,how many times we find ourselves in relationships the other parner changes after some time and then you begin to feel empty because you're not in love anymore,thanks for this beautiful melody you played my friend
steve1223adelaide, South Australia AustraliaSep 14, 2011
Happygolucky4u you have managed to capture the emotions perfectly.
lovecanberealSydney, New South Wales AustraliaFeb 28, 2017
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Such descriptive phrases - "...I don't want to tread upon the stones, of what use to be your heart"...
Yes Niah it is so sad when one wants in and there seems no way to get in. And sometimes the other person is not even aware that someone wanted in.