just any words

by hedistuffLayopolis, West Virginia, USA

Mar 2011 551 Views 4 comments

just any words

just any words won't do it
to make my dreams come true
though I hear your voice so sweetly
as you can hear mine too
our hands are joined so tightly
strolling down the avenue
you wrap your arms around me
our passion shining through
I gaze with need and pleading
into your eyes of deepest blue
for so long we've been together
but now I must bid you adieu
'cause just any words won't do it
unless they're...'I love you'

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Posted: Mar 2011

About this poem:

is saying or hearing the words 'I love you' overated...?

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marikiaTbilisi, GeorgiaMar 26, 2011

Not overated, of course, but love is more than words, I suppose. Don't pin your hopes on words only, dig deeper, perhaps the answer is there. I enjoyed the poem very much, thank you.

RedexNorthumberland, England UKMar 26, 2011

I liked your poem, but for me action speak louder than trips of the tounge

EarlgreyteaLimassol, CyprusMar 26, 2011

I always say, actions speak louder than words, and yes, saying an empty 'i love you', is well, empty..., nice write

gnj4uBoston, Massachusetts USAMar 26, 2011

Hi, hedistuff,
Fortunately, as poets, we have lots of words from which to choose, including just any words. For many, love is more than our passion shining through. Some want it all, actions and words! I'm with them. Thank you for sharing.

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