Beware

Beware my soft young heart in old decrepit shield,
It'll make you feel regret, I'll take revenge, you'll see.
You'll watch torment in eyes, forgiveness you will seek
For what you've done, for what you've made me feel.
For letting love revive in me you'll ask me to forgive,
Cause you will have no rest, won't listen to your pleas.
I'll take revenge, don't think it'll always be like this,
I'll make it hard for you, I'll haunt you in your dreams.
Until I take your breath away, until I make you feel the same
Beware my soft young heart in old decrepit shield.
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Posted: Mar 2011

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Tithonus
One of the best, exceptional poems I've read in the corner! It's truly flawless and pure. Enduring! Beyond praise and comment!
Odette67
I'll make it hard for you, I'll haunt you in your dreams.
Until I take your breath away, until I make you feel the same
Beware my soft young heart in old decrepit shield.

Stunning poem. applause
Fellsman
Hi Marikia

Superb writing, a most enjoyable read.

Bill hug
Macduff5
A great poem Marikia. It conveys so much. thumbs up wine
SCatlyn
Loved this when I first read it earlier, and was going comment, but thought maybe I wouldn't get it right.
I had intended to post how deep, insightful & sad it was... and hoped for the heart to have true love, with a place to rest & no more haunting(though I suppose there is always the potential for hurt where there's love-as in caring about someone & having to watch them go through hard times). But still, a place to rest if you find true love...

Extremely profound poem (and decided I would post whether I got the above right or not) rose
teddybear
Ladybee42
thumbs up very cool marikia - you have a lovely way of writing


teddybear teddybear
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