The Shadow of Your Smile

The shadow of your smile starts there, in your eyes,
I wonder at the promise that your eyes in their deepness hide.
When sun with shadows that it casts on earth in clouds glides,
Playing seek and hide, as if those shadows were my plight,
The shadow of your smile lying deeply in your eyes
Engages me in dreams, sweet dreams of better life.
And when all shadows on sun’s bidding simply die
Smile’s there, in your eyes, like an amazing guide.
Its mere shadow may be promising of love I dearly strive,
Such smile that if the time is right and season’s bright
Does blossom in a way all flowers do when love is ripe.

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Posted: Mar 2011
About this poem:
Being inspired by my fellow poet's poem bearing the same title.

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Odette67
The shadow of your smile starts there, in your eyes,
I wonder at the promise that your eyes in their deepness hide.

The eye's, the windows to the soul. Beautiful poem.

wave
Fellsman
Hi Marikia

This such a romantic read, portraying a gentle passion...

A really fine write...

Bill x hug
Macduff5
A beautifully crafted poem, Marikia, and truly romantic. hug thumbs up
Redex
The shadow of your smile is a lovely poem but sounds sad to me always hidingteddybear
niah9
Lovely Marikia....such a poem...and in the background I could hear the old song...we used to dance Rumba to it......The Shadoe of Your Smile .....great write....Niahangel wow
schawalski
such beautiful words will surely inspire
marzena777
@marika hello wave yes, eyes reflect the state of our soul, ,,Love is ripe ,,is true Love between Man and Women....Thank You
Happygolucky4uonline today!
"The shadow of your smile" That is a sad thought but a lovely poembouquet
tipmeup
beautiful, thank you kiss
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